THANK YOU for keeping them as close to "in-character" as possible. That alone already made this story a full head and shoulders above its peers.

Gorgeous in its intensity, the blood, sweat and simplicity seem to vibrate off the virtual page! This is one of the most erotic fics I think I've ever read, and say whatever that does about myself - this was an intense mind-gasm; excellent work :) Keep it up.

Haha, wow. This was awesome. Everyone was so in character. Shit, I don't even know what else to say besides awesome job.

-Necury

Oh wow.

This was a very nice welcome back into a fandom I haven't been in for a long time.

It was hot and somewhat convultuted, and funny and all the things I like in a fic

Nice. I thought it was funny and sexy. Two elements I always look for in a good story.

After reading it I sat that for a minute thinking...wtf? I kind of had to let it sink in a little ;

So anyway, WOW I was entirely enthralled by your fight scenes, like how amazing they are. I felt all like dirty just reading it, like I could feel the blood dripping and dirt and stuff. That's totally awesome, I probably sound stupid with my repeating but yeah, awesome! This so inspires me to write fight scenes, to make them more descriptive and add more environment to it. I thank you VERY much for this wonderful fiction, no matter how much I was confused at first! D

p.s. ... *drool*

Yet again, wow. I'm amazed at how you turn a fight scene into something sexier than a sex scene, and somehow even more believeable, especially for these two. I love the grittiness and realism you write with ... it's so fitting!

Wow this was really good. A lot of times when people do fighting sences it's hard to fallow, but you did it nicely. I know I would be very happy if you continued on with this story. :D

This was really hot (and it didn't even have sex in it!) Very in character and great descriptions of their fighting. Quite believeable and lots of fun. Thanks for sharing!

*snickers* their way of fighting is so close to sex and their reasoning of why and how they fight is as close to love as they'll ever get. I like this; filthy, bloody and fast... not to mention persistant. MugenJin is a hot paring especially when it coincides with their personalities.

hawt? yes, i think so!

one word: hawt.

write more!

One of my all time fave fanfics in any fandom.

The balance between sex and violence is so beautiful, and Jin and Mugen are perfect.

Just brilliant.

Strangly alluring...

excellent. totally not what i expected and absolutely appropriate. i really loved this.