| Reviews for Fire and Ice |
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Bongo MonkeysXP 2/21/12 . chapter 1Well done! |
E 330 4/6/10 . chapter 1The story was very well written and it had just the right amount of fluff for a romance story. The way you revealed the situation with clues here and there was really nice and enjoyable to read. I don't know if you lurk around anymore, but I really want more people to find this fic, so I'm dropping a review for you :) |
Micuko 7/5/08 . chapter 1wow, loved it, awesome :) |
macaday me a nut 5/16/08 . chapter 1Wow! That was great1 I loved it! I have always liked the fire and ice thing with these 2. They are just to cute! Macaday me a nut (and your one too!) |
Soten 7/6/06 . chapter 1OMFG! i never thought..draco and ...it had chills of pleasure running down my spine..omfg..i was like..YESS FINALLY! lol, this ..the writing style, you're amazing..i want more..more..i say.. |
Veraliana 7/3/06 . chapter 1Hehe, I know you're probably not reading reviews for this fic anymore, but I just have to say you are an EXCELLENT writer. It's absolutely unbelievable how good you are. You have a very poetic and realistic style. Even though Harry and Draco would never end up together in the actual books, you made it feel as though that kind of relationship is completely natural. Your dialogue flows well and I can clearly see the characters' actions. Your only weakness seems to be background detail. I know it's fanfiction and we already know what the commons looks like, etc. however, giving the reader background detail will help them to feel the atmosphere. Is it a dark and gloomy corner or a bright and happy hallway. So other than lack of backround details, your writing is absolutely perfect. Keep up the good work. And if you haven't given up on Kaerichi, I'm still looking forward to the next chapter XD |
SlytherinGoddessRoseThorns 12/28/05 . chapter 1omg i loved that ff. and i love the lil poem type thing at the end.. can I use it if I ever get around to drawing a HPDM resemdled pic? lol Love the story. faves a bazzilion times |
Charlie911 12/23/05 . chapter 1wow thats deep |
Ridley Jack 12/10/05 . chapter 1*sigh* I love Robert Frost. Oh my Sandra! Your writing is magnificent! You put such detail, such care into your words! It's impossible to NOT picture the scenes you're describing, the feelings you depict, the inner turmoil of these two tormented souls. (Gah, that was a corny last phrase!) Anyways, your writing is absolutely beautiful! I like the ending; it's sweet compaired to the rest of the story, which is more angst than most others. Mahvelous job, dahling! |
xPreppyxInxPinkx 12/4/05 . chapter 1Valiant Sonny: they didnt rush to kissing. theyd been secretly doing this for a while now. but omfg! this is really good. i love frost poems. |
LittleLuna13 10/12/05 . chapter 1Awesome story! I loved it! hehehe |
Chaotic Sereniti 9/16/05 . chapter 1wow, i got shivers reading this. i'm speechless, what a great up the good work. |
Abi2 8/31/05 . chapter 1Loved it, it was really amazing. |
keisan 8/30/05 . chapter 1That was a nice combination, fluffy, angsty and steamy all at the same time. Congrats! I really liked it. |
jessica 8/29/05 . chapter 1 beautiful... a work or art... you've got talent... i hope u write more slash... email me if you do, cuz i want to read 'em. |