I must say that I absolutely loved both Frosaken and the Snapshots, but I have a small question that is bothering me.

When the hell did Draco die?! O.o

Yeah. Still love theses, though. Really nice.

~Only Insanity's Shade~

DOn't get me wrong, I loved the outtakes(all three of them) my only question is "When did Draco die?!" and "Why did he die?!"

I think you could take this farther and it would be good. I like this AU Forsaken. It is very interesting.

good fic write more.

Reminds me of a rubber band ball ... the couples you've mentioned in this chapter. A bit of romping and crack-esque fun, isn't it?

I am glad that you went beyond the crack-esque even if the situation was very ... amusing to say the least. XD Sorry if I'm being vague. Anyways, I want to applaud you for this lovely chapter. It's well done and obviously you've put in a lot of effort into it.

Have I mentioned lately how much I hate FFN's restrictions?

*pets* It was absolutely sexy, as I believe I said the fisrt time I read it... ^.~

*bounces* And I still wanna find out what Voldemort does to Brand. XD

~Bats ^.^x

brilliant set of snapshots. I loved all three so far.

I read it on your website, but couldn't review for some reason. The review links were lined over and non-linked :( Also, I find it really hard to navigate your Snapshots section on your website... I run on a Mac, and your drop-down links don't work on here at all :( I had to have my sister send me the URL for them since you don't have the first chapter linked at the main page with text like you do for your other stories.

*bounces* but I do so love your stories, keep up the awesome work!

That was great

I must admit, I'm more of a fan of Tom/Harry, but this chapter was still incredibly hot. I can't wait to read more!

While I like this offshot, I will take you out and beat you with OotP and HBP books until you beg for mercy if you dare kill Draco in the main story. :)
I like this being an AU to Forsaken. A different world plotline. However, with the main story, it just seems wrong to see this. Maybe because I love seeing the father/son relationship that Tom and Harry have. I know it's bad of me, but I just adore all the stories where Harry actually gets a family of some sort.
So, kinky almost incestual Tom/Harry relationship here. Happy Draco/Harry with Tom being Dad at the main one. See, you can have your cake and eat it too!

cool

OOh *breathing difficulties* While I'm awwing over the Snapshots, it would be most appropriate for me to heap lauding words upon you, goddess, you...

The Forsaken universe could not take a better turn of events in my opinion. It is so rare in fanfiction to swap one major pairing against another later in the story and only for that it deserves good notice, but also you have tickled my HP/LV-bone and it is so rare one to get tickled as you yourself must know.

I read it at Grazhir and it rocks.

It is so kinky I'm out of words. Roleplaying at it's best, not to mention the familial bonds that really ARE somewhat disturbing.

I wish you write more.

M. Yum. *purrs and pets Brand and Tom* *huggles Grazhir* *sets up alter for ShivaniBlue*

cute storyy. =) i want the next chapter NOW!!

Read it at Grahzir, reviewing here. You probably could have included the last part here on ffn, btw. It's what I liked best about the chapter.
I don't think that's because the sex scene was bad, really. It's just that it's written from the POV of the dom, and it makes me feel uncomfortable. (Like I didn't know already I'm more of a sub, if anything.) Seems to me Voldemort overdid it a bit, but if he doesn't expect to ever get a chance again, and considering Brand asked to be fucked into oblivion, that's understandable. He did manage to come up with some pretty interesting things on such short notice.
As I said, I like the last part best. It puts things into perspective, and those two always seem to have nice conversations. And Brand threatening to hex his 'father' is always funny.

Thanks for writing,

cloe