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Kiranagio
2009-10-20 . chapter 3
Old but still good. I think this is one of the best Ryu/Tats I've read, smart idea to have them meet (and somehow fall in love) so soon. I love the "mickael jackson" part. Nice job.
ThePenandtheSword
2008-03-08 . chapter 3
*laughing uncontrollably*

My gosh, this was awesome! I just LOVE chapter three with Ryuichi's mental argument-heck, I loved all of the chapters! You kept the characters so...well, IN-character! And the way you added the stressful humor to it was pure genius ("You will not think Michael Jackson thoughts"...sorry on my misquote, but you get my drift).

I love your writing style you used so much that this is going in my favs. Great job!
Blue-Eyed-Brat
2007-03-21 . chapter 3
That was adorable and I loved the line "I'd josh him out of his funk." That was so funny and perfect!! And poor Tats-chan! This was a great story, Thx for posting it!
KittyBlue
2007-03-19 . chapter 3
really nice! so cute!
i sure hope you decide to do a sequel!
^p^
UnForgettableSin
2007-01-02 . chapter 3
how old are they anyway?but good, i love the images i got from the posters(YaOi GiRl To ThE eNd!XD)and now i'm going to find them in another fic *wink*
Second Storey Stairwell
2006-12-26 . chapter 3
This is really good, I was suprised at how good it was actually. Its so different from the summary. You writing is very good and I hope that you write a sequel! Just wondering, this really shouldnt be more than a 'T' should it?
Iarejedi
2006-12-13 . chapter 3
Aw! That was so cute and silly. Loved it. I love your Ryuichi. He's so much more interesting.
lovebbyangel
2006-09-25 . chapter 3
ohh how sweet
KiagouTomb
2006-09-19 . chapter 3
*happy gush* aw...!
Shinrei
2006-08-29 . chapter 3
"It's the infamous ‘hump Tohma,' shot" ...best line EVER! XD
wow...this was really good! i laughed so hard!
MistressKiwi
2006-07-19 . chapter 3
aww ^_^

that's all I have to say about this...twas cute

~MistressKiwi
DieRavenMaiden
2006-05-18 . chapter 3
feels unfinished
Xenshie
2006-03-02 . chapter 3
heehee, that was real good. real sweet too. sweet lil tatsuha. heehee, unlike the tatsuha we all know, huh? despite the everlasting love of Ryuichi Sakuma, heehee
Ascend With Ivy
2005-12-30 . chapter 3
Good story :) I liked the Michael Jackson comment, lol.
Sui-chan
2005-12-17 . chapter 3
^^ I love it!
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