Oh... Wonderful.

Wow. It was so very very *very* good. Loved it. Those two are part of my favourite characters, so that just adds to it, of course!
As for English not being your first language, well I'm the same, so I'll just congratulate you for trying and succeeding (because I could hardly tell and wouldn't have known hadn't you said it first), and thank you for sharing!^^

Wow this is great!! Never ever had read anything that explains so perfectly Milo and Camus too. You are very good to write in English (unlike me), congratulations and continue, you have a great talent.

Wohohoho!

SO WONDERFUL!

-.- I think you personificated Milo perfectly. WOW! Congratulations! This must be one of the better jobs I've seen of this couple.

I also think you did an excelent job with the translation... but i'm mexican.. so don't trust me that much.

I still loved it. Congrats!

Beautiful... but very sad.

Very good writing (and moreover you're very good at English !), I find it very moving.

De una manera, tambien tuve la impresion de que ambos, en tu fic, tienen un vinculo muy sutil, una como comprension, a pesar de los conflictos que les ha separado. Adversarios, pero tambien mas.

Muy bonito, espero que Milo y Camus vayan a experimentar felicidad un dia... pueder ser, en el cielo.

Lord Ma-koto