I really like this story. But (yes sorry theres a but) Im a little confused. I understand that Hermione has a brother and her fathers Voldemort. Also that Dracos parents are dead and everything. But the whole, jumping around to different days and suddenly Draco and Hermione are engaged! im just a little confused on how long they've been seeing each other. And how many days have gone by since they've gotten to Hogwarts. Ive feel like im missing some giant part of something. It is a really awesome story though. And is Snape related to Hermione? Because I kind of think so due to the little quip of Snape understands her better than Draco. Just curious!

woah! so good! continue plz!

You are a great writer! keep writing! I love it!

Hey you. I know that this is on Chapter Nine instead of Ten, but since I've already posted a review on Chapter Ten, it wouldn't let me do another one. But I just wanted to let you know that I updated my story so now it has two chapters. Please read and review.

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I'M SO FREAKING LOST!

OKAY! I haven't read this in a while because I didn't think you were going to be able to update. I'd like to help you write again... BUT IF YOU WERE IN OHIO THAT MAY HELP! I'll be able to read a lot more. Maybe some weekends, maybe once a month we can get together and write some more. Maybe even start our own story together. I wouldn't mind doing some kind of dancing/musical thing you know? Call me from Cali! Or at least when you get home which had better be soon. I have some more chapters to read so I'll leave more in a few. Later gurlie!

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Hey, this is an interesting start. I like this already. Keep it up

no hermione can't die, plz update soon

Ciao

Damn thats one constrictive father theyve got there. But definitley love the twists! Moving to Slytherin? I dont think Hermione would mind that if her friends wouls still stick with her, because then she could have Draco a little more easily. And the grades? PSH she's the best anyways. But yea... LOVE it ! ;P

Cant wait for more !

Love, Draco's Lioness

sorry but the leter to malfo was so out there that i just can't read the rest but other then that it is good.

great chapter! i love the ending! lol

update soon!

Great chappy, cant wait for more.

...wow

great chapter.

some of it is a little bit choppy...like the letter hermiones mother sent her. how would she not know that she slept with voldemort and the end result was hermione and aaron? it just doesnt make sense. other than that i think this story is great and has a lot of potential. i love the plot and its a mix of ideas that i have read before (like hermione being voldemorts daughter) and original ideas (like draco having a sister and hermione having a brother)

Well, great chapter.

Update soon.

Who is the shadow? Must have been hard finding out you had a brother and an evil father all in one day. What is Draco's sister's name?

Wow great chapter, Can't wait for the next installment :)

Love, Draco's Lioness