 thewarriorinside 2008-12-16 . chapter 2This sounds cool,
Plz start writing it again.
Don't make me have to use my puppy pout! |
 Rock Raider 2006-07-30 . chapter 2Hmm, more than likely to get to Jelly Cabin, Phil will have to go straight through Acorn Flats. I wonder what the Squirrel Scouts will do once they see a zombie in Acorn Flats. & I wonder what Phil wants that's in Jelly Cabin. Well, anyway, update soon. |
 Celene Moon 2006-06-12 . chapter 1titanboy753, quit complaining and read. You didn't even write that review correctly, so why are you giving critiszm?
Original review:
Well it okay i guess but you are writing really short chapter please make them long if you wish to make it better
Correction:
Well, it was okay I guess, but you are writing really short chapters. Please make them longer if you wish to make them better. |
 TheEmoMimeLord 2006-06-12 . chapter 2Despite some spelling mistakes, this story does have potential. The scout master's name is Lumpus. I'm surprised that you actually know what specific animal Clam is. I had no idea what he was! XD
But anyway, update please. Sad, Phil didn't live past the turn of the century. |
 Dojo Cat 2005-12-04 . chapter 2that is really a cool idea.
zombies...
BOO!
haa, just kidding. this was pretty cool. |
 Sadahiko 2005-09-23 . chapter 2Well it okay i guess but your are writing really short chapter please make them long if you wish to make it better |
 DemiHuman123 2005-09-22 . chapter 2O... Scary stuff, Lazlo. He has no idea what he's gonna get himself into now does he? It's a great fic thus far! The only problem I can see though is that the chapters seem so small. It's a good fic, expand on it. Keep up on the good work! |
 oc-crazy 2005-09-09 . chapter 2Thats kind of confuzzing, but thank you for the new chapter. |
 Minotoro Luver aka Seconteen 2005-09-03 . chapter 1I don't see anything bad with it. it is good. |
 oc-crazy 2005-08-31 . chapter 1Coolness! Write more som it is a good fic! 1 up! |
 Ectite 2005-08-29 . chapter 1Wow! Nice job, keep on writing! I'll read the next chapter when it comes. Also, can't wait to see your Foster's fan fictions! |