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thewarriorinside
2008-12-16 . chapter 2
This sounds cool,
Plz start writing it again.
Don't make me have to use my puppy pout!
Rock Raider
2006-07-30 . chapter 2
Hmm, more than likely to get to Jelly Cabin, Phil will have to go straight through Acorn Flats. I wonder what the Squirrel Scouts will do once they see a zombie in Acorn Flats. & I wonder what Phil wants that's in Jelly Cabin. Well, anyway, update soon.
Celene Moon
2006-06-12 . chapter 1
titanboy753, quit complaining and read. You didn't even write that review correctly, so why are you giving critiszm?

Original review:
Well it okay i guess but you are writing really short chapter please make them long if you wish to make it better

Correction:
Well, it was okay I guess, but you are writing really short chapters. Please make them longer if you wish to make them better.
TheEmoMimeLord
2006-06-12 . chapter 2
Despite some spelling mistakes, this story does have potential. The scout master's name is Lumpus. I'm surprised that you actually know what specific animal Clam is. I had no idea what he was! XD

But anyway, update please. Sad, Phil didn't live past the turn of the century.
Dojo Cat
2005-12-04 . chapter 2
that is really a cool idea.
zombies...
BOO!
haa, just kidding. this was pretty cool.
Sadahiko
2005-09-23 . chapter 2
Well it okay i guess but your are writing really short chapter please make them long if you wish to make it better
DemiHuman123
2005-09-22 . chapter 2
O... Scary stuff, Lazlo. He has no idea what he's gonna get himself into now does he? It's a great fic thus far! The only problem I can see though is that the chapters seem so small. It's a good fic, expand on it. Keep up on the good work!
oc-crazy
2005-09-09 . chapter 2
Thats kind of confuzzing, but thank you for the new chapter.
Minotoro Luver aka Seconteen
2005-09-03 . chapter 1
I don't see anything bad with it. it is good.
oc-crazy
2005-08-31 . chapter 1
Coolness! Write more som it is a good fic! 1 up!
Ectite
2005-08-29 . chapter 1
Wow! Nice job, keep on writing! I'll read the next chapter when it comes. Also, can't wait to see your Foster's fan fictions!
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