I really like these histories that you are writing for the characters of your Fall of Nobility Story. I really liked that story; your writing was very discriptive without being tedious, and each person had thier distinctive way of acting and thinking. Here in this story, I like how you show them interacting with thier friends, and how they met eachother from the references you made in the main story. I really look forward to the next part, actually I look forward to the whole story, but I guess I'll have to wait for that.

I love these. Can't wait for the next one. I'll be looking forward to it.