good story, might have read it before. dont feel bad about not knowing much about the ultimate verse, i know jackshit about it myself other than what i have read in various fanfics, lol. anyway, there were two reasons why i decided to review now rather than at the end of the story.

1. quicksilver's name is pietro, not pedro. it might be the same name in different languages, but its still not his name.

2. i wanted to inquire as to whether or not it would be possible to get a link to Joe's version of it? i can't find it over on tth, of course, i only read the story titles because i didnt want to go through the summaries of five pages of stories...

in any case, entertaining read so far, even with the typos.

If you do a sequel, something to consider-

As we know, that insane preacher called Xander "The One Who Sees". If that eye now in Xander is the one Odin sacrificed for wisdom...

I'm not hugely surprised.

Xander Harris has always been a natural channel for the Otherworldly, and Odin's a heck of a step up from the Hyena.

For all his sins, he cleaned up nicely.. and he picked up Mjolnir. (Odin's dropped the ball a couple of times, too..)

I love this can't wait to see upgrades in faiths armor

man your stoies are great. i love the im some what drunk statement.

Loved it from begining to end it was amazing.

My father has cancer so I understand I hope they'll be okay.

I'm clad to hear that your writing your own original work of fiction I hope it goes well.

If the other guy did better then you then I really can't wait to read his cause yours is dam good. To bad you can't money from fanfic but I think you could make some money if you wrote a story and got it published so what ever you do I hope you can make it as a writer good luck.

Beutiful.

Er, the gag was that Xander made the same sacrifice as Odin(or had it made for him), right?

I just loved it.

Really had me laughing with what Faith had done to the other heroes before sending Tony flying through the door and her coming after him.

That too.

AWESOME story! All I can really say. thanks.

This is the single most inaccurate, fanwanked fanfiction I have ever read. I guess you have something against the Ultimates, but this is ridiculous. Most everybody is out of character, you can't even spell their names right, and no matter what logic should dictate, the Buffy people always come out on top. I mean, do you have the slightest clue how stupid you would have to be to accept this crap as decent writing?

Very well done!