OMG. this is amazing writing. I love it. I'm a huge fan of Cold Case and i would love to see these two to get together. I think you have captured their relationship extremely well, especially him calling her "Lil" and the way they don't really say anyhting using words. Just amazing

haha. rhododendron bush...that cracked me up. i've never heard that before. anywho, great fic!

*g*, sweet, worth ruining my teeth ;-)
thanks for writing and sharing!
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LOL! Those are some thin walls! :) Scotty's madre cracks me up! Es muy Loca, no? Y muy intelijente tambien! Si, this story es MUY bien! Muchos Grasias for a story muy fantastico!! :P

this was sweet and fun. and altough my fillings are melting i wanna say a huge thank you for this. I just love sweets :)

Aw... And aww in a big way. The kind of fluff you can float away on. That was gorgeous. Really gorgeous. I think that's my word tonight. Anyway, I loved it... I'm not a massive, massive fan of the whole Lil/Scotty thing, but you're making it work! Niceness.

UM... Is the story over or is it incomplete?

Alright. I'v enever seen Cold Case, but I read your review of Cabin Fever and wanted to get in touch with you, so I picked the fic that didn't really have too much to do with the show, so I could actually read it. *grin*

That said, because I don't know the characters, this review won't be particularly helpful, but I can tell you that I loved it. Just the right amount of angst to keep it from becoming The Giant Fluffmonster From Hell. Those are frightening.

And I actually have written a longer Natalie/Monk fic. I just finished it, though: a few months ago, so it's not showing up on the first page anymore. It's called "Mr. Monk and the Houseguests," if you're interested.

i dont get da "is it true and all of dat in da middle!!

wat waz goin on??

I loved it. Its so sweet. Congrats!

LOVe it!! especially when the aut says the bush just grew, that was funny.

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It was a very sweet story. I really liked it.

How sweet! *squeal* Your writing ROCKS! I could never write like this...Anyway, this was very well-written and nice. I loved it, as usual.

Hey.
Jeez, Scotty's family looks like mine so much! There is always someone trying to know all my secrets! They'll get me insane!
It was a really nice story. Loved it.
Mellie.