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l a c e y LU 2007-08-16 ch 7,	abuseWow, this story is fantastic. You need to update this! The relationship (or lack thereof)between Slade and Terra is magnificently portrayed. Absolutely. PS, I've seen your DevArt gallery; Fantastic as well.
kazumigirl 2007-07-31 ch 7,	abusePlease, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please,Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please,Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please,Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please,Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please continue!
Axel Cratos 2007-05-05 ch 7,	abuseFinally got around to finishing this. Very well done, I just wished you'd finish it. Ah well.
Axel Cratos 2007-04-27 ch 2,	abuseThat is the greatest Slade, Terra fanfic I've every read! I really like how u kept Slade in character the whole time. Well on to the next one!
Rogue Rikku 2007-01-19 ch 7,	abuseI like this story. I think that it's so real to the story of Terra presented in "Teen Titans" and you keep the characters true to how they are in the show. I don't think that it should be rated M, but it was still good nontheless. Good job and great writing skills.
TatsuraChan 2006-06-21 ch 7,	abuseGreat story! You're a great writer as well as a great artist Remix! I'm faving this BIG time!
Scorpio Serpent 2006-06-11 ch 7,	abuseoh, I really like it! adds to favs Update soon!
Who Else? 2006-05-11 ch 7, anon.	abuseI have just been reading Azelma's "Cognitive Dissonance", which I think you and Darth Nat are beta-ing (?). Well! Two Terra fics at one go by two such acquaintances... I have no doubts at all about both your writing styles, and I must say the contrasting turns your stories are taking keep me on my toes. It's been a long time since you worked on "Armor", and it started out a fascinating story, about the same time as your "2005 Super-Villain Conference" (by the way, you simply have to write a sequel to that, darlin'; or a prequel, whatever: the plot is great, wacky, and in typically dry Remix fashion). However, "Armor" has hit a few bumpy spots lately. Your chapter titles are still poetic as ever; Terra, however, is behaving a little OoC and over-fidgety. Do you feel that she could tell Slade, "kill me and get over with it"? She might have some of Deadshot's ennui in her. Most people claim Terra would never have the nerve to go through with suicide, but I believe she's desperate enough to risk that since she just doesn't have the mental capacity to deal with suffering and adversity. I'm not Terra-bashing, mind you. I have the highest respect for Tara, Gregor and Brion Markov. But the shamanic earth spirit of the earlier chapters (comparable to the wild untamed qualities of Storm, if you'll allow me to bring up a Marvel example) has dissolved. Terra's character is a lot steelier than the nervous Nellie we seem to be seeing now. These are just thoughts on Terra's personality -- which is really very diverse, such that many writers choose to focus on one particular aspect. I'm not saying that you're wrong -- congratulations if you want to see Terra that way -- just offering a divergent view. Whatever it is, though, keep up the humour fics! I loved "Freedom". =) Bye, Jillian.
GDeacur 2006-05-04 ch 7,	abuseI think that this might be the most well written fanfiction I've come across. If someone ever tells me that all fanfiction sucks, I'm going to use this story to show them otherwise. Uh, anyways, this is now my favorite TT fanfic ever. Style and substance mixed into one. I liked the balance between description of surroundings and inner thoughts. I can't really give you any criticisms for this. Theoretically, fanfiction should expand on what the show offers. But what you have here seems to offer much, much more than the show, making it seem like the TV series is the fanfiction. If I enjoy your work more than that of professional writers... you must be doing something right.
hhgbh 2006-05-03 ch 7,	abuseWhoa... sucks to be her. Slade's got Terra well and truly trapped now. She's got no choice but to obey until an opportunity to escape presents itself or, more likely, hopelessness forces her to give in to Slade completely. Looking forward to the next chapter.
vampireselene 2006-01-27 ch 6, anon.	abusefinally, an update! this is such a good story, but honestly, u kill me by making me wait so long!
Infamous One 2006-01-27 ch 6,	abuseYa' know Slade was being such the good father figure until now...I always said he didn't handle rejection,or in his mind betrayal,very well. Bravo,nice chapter...
unknown reviewer 2006-01-26 ch 6, anon.	abuseafter the travesty that was season 5 it's nice to see some decent TT stuff every now and then. And when I need my fix for good TT stories there is no other author I would rather turn to. The way you write Slade is absolutly perfect. Terra as well. I have been waiting to reach this point in the story, the point were you deviate from the storyline of season 2. Can't wait to see how things turn out with Terra resisting Slade. Keep up the good work. Sincerely, THE UNKNOWN REVIEWER p.s. - can't wait for True Mastery and your other ideas either.
JadeRaven93 2006-01-26 ch 6,	abuseWhoa. You right too good. Ha, but seriously, you're awesome at writing. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
hhgbh 2006-01-25 ch 6,	abuseOh man! I shudder to think what Slade's gonna do to Terra now. The charade's over. It's time for Slade to show his true colours. Once again, excellent work on the chapter. You're writing is clear and easy to read. I can picture what's going on, just fine. You're grasp of both the character's personalities is bang on, in my opinion. BTW, while waiting for the next chapter, I took a look at your other completed stories. They are all awesome! Whether you're being funny or serious, you write so well and the stories are all so enjoyable, with everyone in character. Looking forward to the next chapter. Really want to see what happens next. P.S. Also love your fan-art and fan-comics. You are one talented individual.

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