erin112492 2006-05-09 . chapter 1Aw! That was just to cute. Nice job describing the details. I like how you talked about his eyes. Im new at this so i dont really know what to say so. Write more!! lol |
LaydeeBear 2006-01-02 . chapter 1That was absolutely awesome, I'd love to read a sequel! |
csicrazii 2005-09-15 . chapter 1woah, are you going to continue?? please do... |
CSIGirl-05 2005-09-14 . chapter 1OMG!! awesome!! so did not se that coming!!
u shold write a sequel to this!! |
Spalding R. Willows 2005-09-02 . chapter 1Hey ! nice ! so cute!
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saras chick 2005-08-31 . chapter 1 keep going great story real deep |
saras chick 2005-08-31 . chapter 1 keep going great story real deep |
saras chick 2005-08-31 . chapter 1 keep going great story real deep |
rojaji 2005-08-31 . chapter 1fin? no way! how about tbc!
beautiful little piece though. |
Bomber6 2005-08-31 . chapter 1 That was really good. Please do a Nick POV..Please. |
Anushka 2005-08-31 . chapter 1I loved this, a lot. |
CrazyMaritimer 2005-08-30 . chapter 1Wow! I thought this was great. The way you described the details was very well done! |
The Notorious Cat 2005-08-30 . chapter 1AH DONT YOU DARE END IT THERE!
NO
I will cry for hours upon hours if you never update.
TNC |
AnMaDeRoNi 2005-08-30 . chapter 1You should write another chapter on this. I really like it, too! Please please please! |
bubblecat 2005-08-30 . chapter 1 love it, I want more, sequel?
n_s |