 thegriffin88 2009-06-25 . chapter 2"Well considering the alternative is to let a ** writer lead Konoha and have you ally with Tsunade in a declaration of war against the Leaf, their options are limited."
Griffin: *turns to Jiraiya* I'd vote for you, personally. But that's just me...I'm not allowed to vote.
Shinobi Griffin: Agent of Chaos. (and protection. but mostly chaos) |
 timme 2009-04-26 . chapter 8 ~sigh~ people are sheep. afraid and spiteful rather than understanding, and thinking they have the right to understand everything, as though nothing is good enough to simply accept and let live. nothing in their pitiful mundane lives lets them know that fear is damaging to someone else. no excuse. |
 yaminoyuki 2009-02-17 . chapter 4Cute! Poor Jira though... |
 Kohaku Kawa 2008-01-24 . chapter 1010: wow this was haunting, especially at the end. Very nice transition From writing only about the sannin.
I don't want to read anymore until I find out what happens for myself though.
I'll be back once I have! Thanks for all the great stories! |
 Kohaku Kawa 2008-01-24 . chapter 99: I don't think this is as good as your other ones. Probably because it's more of an episode-like story. I just like the reflections/meditations more.
That said I did like it as a quick adventure, and you developed Jiraiya's character through it. |
 Kohaku Kawa 2008-01-24 . chapter 88: I like this one too. It's sad but also cute in the end. I can see Orochimaru doing all of those things.
I like that this is from Jiraiya's pov instead of Oro's or Tsunade's. |
 Kohaku Kawa 2008-01-23 . chapter 77: wow I didn't think that I liked it until the very end. When I realized that it was about Oro's parents everything fit together so well!
I like this chapter a lot after all! |
 Kohaku Kawa 2008-01-18 . chapter 66: wow that makes a lot of sense. You really get inside Orochimaru's mind. |
 Kohaku Kawa 2008-01-18 . chapter 55: yeah, that would be Orochimaru's idea of a good day. I didn't see the title until after I'd read it, then I laughed. It's perfect. |
 Kohaku Kawa 2008-01-15 . chapter 4fourth: Nice, I like pairing those two together. It was a clever way to handle the challenge too, it didn't seemed forced at all. |
 Kohaku Kawa 2008-01-15 . chapter 3third story: That last line is too perfect! It's almost sad.
This is a nice drabble, I like the look into the past. |
 Kohaku Kawa 2008-01-15 . chapter 2second story: This is a neat flip on the story. It's great that everyone (except maybe Tsunade) is kept in character. |
 Kohaku Kawa 2008-01-15 . chapter 1This first one is great! Naruto fits the guilible listener so well!
I love the ending especially, Orochimaru is my favorite. |
 Agent Swiper 2008-01-05 . chapter 11OMG I loved this fanfic! orochimaru and jiraiya, along with tsunade, rock. ^_^
Please continue! :) |
 fiore777 2007-12-23 . chapter 11Oh, nicely done, to see how Orochimaru could have dealt with such a thing without yet having the incredible regenerative abilities he has later. I do wonder though, why Sasori would have helped Orochimaru after the Sannin had made a move to attack someone else within Akatsuki. |