so good! please contiue writing!

Very nice! This is a tightly written, nicely focused story. I have to admit that it was a pairing that I never imagined, but you made it work - and the device of using specific dates to advance your story in parallel to the television universe was ingenius. I don't know if you're through with this story, but it feels as if it is winding down to a very satisfying end. Well done.

Your story is wonderful.

I'm pleased to see that you've written more.

I can't wait to see where this is going.

This is a brilliant idea, and I really enjoyed reading it. The character of Zach has an epic quality that was lost on AMC when his undying love was wasted on Maria, but it really comes out here. The backstory using Anna and Zach, on the other hand, gave me shivers, but in a good way. Well done.

Wonderful idea!

I always thought that Zack and Anna would have made a great couple and now I have

Keep it up!

This is really interesting to read! Anna and Zach. So classy. :-)