Hmm...Now I've always believe Remus wasn't entirely a melancholic do-good-er, and your portrayal of him was...Well, I'm not exactly sure how I would classify it. Your writing style is, I think, what gave the story its punch. The fact there was very little description, outside of the dialogue I mean, allows the reader to imagine the scene in his(or her) own way. Excellently done there--that takes a certain amount of skill. I've only one bone to pick.

Remus, agreed, has a darker side, but however dark a person is, I do not think anyone would go as far to use 'Crucio' on a previous friend. This story is obviously post-Voldemort's demise. Now, I've never fought in such a battle, but I believe that the relief of defeating such a foe would make someone think again about using a curse so rampantly used by said defeated enemy. (I hope that made some amount of sense.) That is the only part where Remus seems slightly out of character.

I see you have moved away from Harry Potter (based on asumptions about recent posts). I'm very sorry to read that. I should like to see more of this particular Remus.

Hamlet II

I don't want to say I liked it... it was too cruel for that. But damn, what else am I going to say? Okay fine, I liked it! I liked the merciless twist you gave Remus' character, the sharp words and Tonks' thoughts. Even worse, I loved it. *sigh*

GO REMY!

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wow...

*opens mouth*
*closes mouth*
woah
the whole "All you have to apeal to is Moony" literally gave me goose bumps...
very good
sad and depressing but conpleatly in the lines of the story and it's characters
wonderful
~hope

dark and tragic but delicious!

i loved every second of it, marvelously done! More very soon, i hope!

Wow! Brillant ending! I love how you take Remus with a completly different spin in this kind of situation. It's very refreshing seeing a new look at the characters, but within reason. ^__^ Excellent job!

--Thief