will you continue it plz

i can't believe the girls do that mitch isn't that bad

princess such a brat

That was beautiful:)

Heh heh.Poor Him.Are you going to write a sequel?

Oops - my bad for getting the words confused. :)

A brazier is not a brassiere. A brazier is an altar type place where wood is burned, also it could be a metal pan for holding burning coals or charcoal, or a cooking device consisting of a charcoal or electric heating source over which food is grilled.

But to make things less confusing I reworded the sentence slightly by substituting the words 'sacrificial altar'

Lovely work, DynamoDave - a very emotional story. I understand what Eden is, but I'm not quite sure why he said it; would I be right in saying that he wishes he was in Eden again?
It's great that Mitch finally knows something about his parents, and has become friends with the girls (I thought Buttercup was already his friend in the TV show? She certainly seems to be - some of the time anyway).
Fave line: "An eons long grudge had been exposed, thrust outwards, doused with alcohol, set ablaze, and placed in a brazier for all to see." A bra? What does a bra have to do with anything at this moment? :)
Anyway, great work; are you planning on writing any further sequels?

Who or what is Eden, you ask? Maybe this will help. Try Eden, as in, the Garden of...

not bad but one question

Who or what is "eden"