what song was this based on? my mind is a blank on this one... very cute, in my opinion

I liked this. Very reminiscent of a fairytale, in a modern context. The way you described the dance was really good as well. And it's vague enough for me to want more, haha! :D I especially like th last lines. I'm a romantic, what can I say? Great work!

Oh god, one dance and they live the rest of their lives together? It was a little bit sappy, but otherwise, a pretty good fairytale.

...whoa.I WISH I could marry somebody after one dance...it would be an impossible fairytale (:

WalkingFingers:

LONG LIVE THE KING AND QUEEN! hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha sorry i thought that and had to review it!
cute srory.

deffinatly different

Ahahahahahahaha

XD Oh bob...

OMG! I love this story

And the peasants rejoiced! Hahaa! That was great,I loved it! Wow, you're really good. everything was so smooth and... perfect. ^.^ I'm all happy now.
-Sephora

cool. make another.

that was a great one shot!!^_^cuz the ending wasnt crappy!lol,anyways,GREAT JOB!cant wait 2 c sum of ur other fics,lata!

Okay...that was weird...but in a good way!! Weird is good! Yay!

~Lugian

great fic very sweet

ohayo~! I like your story! really kawaii. :3 keep writing.

"And the peasants rejoyced" HAHA! *rofl*
That was so different, the only thing I can't quite picture is them in their old clothes in a modern day club, its a very interesting concept. Really well written. Loved it!
Virgo =)