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| Aliinnen 2005-11-23 ch 2,  | abuseOMG! I totally love this! Not to sound like an airhead, but I really, truly do! You are the first person I have ever seen to make a crossover of my two favorite anime! If Shadow were not my god, I would worship thee... -bows to thee- |
| Jjaro 2005-09-09 ch 2, | abuseYou know this stroy isnt that bad, but i think it could use some improvement. What i really didnt like wasthat this whole 2nd chapter was kinda confusing. Mainly about who was talking and how it flowed just threw me off. Now is Angelica replacing botan? What happened to Botan? And will the rest of the cast be entering this stroy, like Hiei or Kurama? Is the king King Enma. What happened to Koenma?I'm really left wondering here. Now dont get me wrong, im finding this stroy very interesting and i think that it will turn out good. Dont feel bad, i woulnd't know how to kill roy either. I wouldn't be able to bring myself to be able to kill him (although in one of my stories i made him get hurt.) And one request please, Please resurrect Hughes!! On another note, my sister has wrote a YYH/FMA crossover. Not many out there so im going to encourage all that i can. Read it and see if you like. Not only to be mean to my sister, and im speaking hte truth too, i tink you add a little bit more description then her in which i really like. Description makes the stroy (thats what i think) so please dont forget that. I'm looking forward to seeing how you will pull this off. |
| Soul's Eclipse 2005-09-06 ch 2, | abuseUh huh...update soon! |
| x.X.x YoiU x.X.x 2005-09-05 ch 2, | abuseyou have to update! the internet is the only good thing to look forward to during the school year! and i like this story! |
| MyImaginaryInuYasha 2005-09-04 ch 2, | abuseNihao! I'm vaguely confused again, but this time, it's all my fault. I failed to notice this was a YYH crossover. I have no clue about anything YYH related. Too bad for me, this is a great story and I'm gonna keep reading. I'm smart, I'll figure it out ^.~ Keep up the good work! Review next time, ~MyimaginaryInu~ |
| oOo-Hiya-oOo 2005-09-04 ch 2, | abuseOh That is quite alright^^I got kinda confused this chappie because I'm like half asleep..but I'll reread it and hopefully it will make some sense at least..Update soon please! |
| x.X.x YoiU x.X.x 2005-09-03 ch 1, | abusegasp |
| Frip-Ouille 2005-09-03 ch 2, | abusea very strange story, but i like it. Please update. |
| oOo-Hiya-oOo 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI luffed it^^Does Hughes come up in this story?I want to know!!T.T Update soon please. |
| MyImaginaryInuYasha 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI loved it, even though I have no idea whatsoever about the YYH plotline/characters/whatever else goes on. Initially I found that story because it didn't seem to make my poor Roy-chan gay. ::hugs Roy-chan:: I came accross THREE of those on my first trip thru the FMA fanfictions. Not pleased. Anyway, I can't wait to find out what happens. A little constructive criticism though- it was a little confusing. Was he dead or wasn't he? At times it seemed like he was, and then it seemed like he wasn't. Which is it? Looking forward to reading chap. 2, ~MyImaginaryInu~ |
| Thatz of the Dragon knights 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseUpdate soon plz! Thats all i can say its really interesting so far. oh if u get a chance might u read my fma story. |
| WildfireDreams 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseinteresting, keep up the good work. |