I liked the last two chapters. Like Envy's destructual streak... It's somewhat refreshing. ^^

This has to be my favorite fanfic on the entire site ^^
Great use of dialougue, characterization, and such. I've printed out all of these becasue I love having them on hand. Keep writing ^^!!

aw... Did Greed die ALREADY??! that's not fair! i like him TT_TT well... i know he's gonna to die anyway - -" this is such a good image of Greed/Envy.. i mean.. i can imagine the picture when i was reading it.. ha... i love this fiction..(just joping a bit that Greed would come back... but..yeah - -)

keep writing the good ones! is there gonna to be a bit of Envy/Wrath?

heh heh...i love Envy.. he's my fav character though

Hmm... Envy continues to think of Greed, huh? ^__^ I like Wrath very much, and you write he and Envy's interaction very well.

My favorite part, though, has to be this:

'He’d strangled the brat twice, shot him once, stuffed him full of whatever chemicals or poisons he had on hand and made the mouse spontaneously combust, and mortally stabbed him four times. Envy, in return, had been drowned once, smashed twice, exploded once, and had been tackled, punched, and snuggled enough to make him vomit.'

^__^;

Celine Dion was the most disturbing part of this, I have to say. ^__^;; And this had more than enough disturbing things- I think I forgot to say this, but I really like how you play continuously with the fact that there were more than one Lust. ^__^

Father-figure!? O__o That is very screwy.

^__^ I'm always very impressed with how true-to-character you keep things - that was bloody and gory and murderously Envy, and damn, Greed is cool. The ending was surprisingly funny!

I just thought I'd let you know that I'm printing this for an Envy-obsessed friend of mine with no internet. ;D

Hmm... What an interesting image, Envy blowing bubbles - and he doesn't even like sweets! That's something I could see him doing. ^_^

Oh my gosh, it's so incredibly psycho, so incredibly *Envy*! I love it! ^__^ One drabble, and you've got his character down better than most I've read! Can't wait for more!

keep it coming, you have my attention

I just love Greed's last line.