WOW! That was awesome! I just had to keep reading and reading. You made me almost late to work. :) Guess that just goes to show what an awesome writer you are. AMAZING! But ugh. The way you write pneumonia. It just makes me wince in sympathy. You have the elephant sitting on your chest part down pat.
Now I'm off to read your other stories. :D Thanks so much!

This was a great story. Really entertaining and interesting, and the torture was horrifying, though to be frank, the worst part of it was the complete lack of regard for John's comfort and health. Well-written.

Then McKay sighed as if he understood. "You've been talking to dead people again, haven't you? What is it with you and talking to dead people?"

Awesome quote. Love it.

"You know, you miss a lot when you work nights. I may have to speak to you about my hours." Fantastic quote. Love it.

Aw, couldn't you have killed Kavanaugh? Pleaasee? Well, I guess I do see how Sheppard's too good of a guy to kill someone, but still. If this had been written in the fourth or fifth season, I would say let Ronon have him. He has no compunction to save him and is really protective of Sheppard. Kavanaugh deserves having "Conan" leer at him and try to kill him. That being said, I really liked how evil you made him. Made me hate him more than I do Woolsey and that's saying something. Good job.

Wow! Amazing story. Loved reading every minute of it!

wow, that was so awesome

its about 2 in the morning, and i was only gunna read a few chapters, and then it got dark and intense and evil, and i couldn't help myself...

i bet you heard this from everyone, but man did i want to kill kavanaugh. i didn't like him in the show either, he's a good choice for an atlantis-based badguy!

like i said, realy, really, really great!
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Really good story. Good ending too. I cried and I don't do cry.

What a blast of a whuping adventure!

I wanted someone to kick Kavanaugh's =. Somebody should have... okay, not nice.

Thanks for the wild ride. I loved it!

*applaudes* *whistles* *applaudes* Good work! *Huggles* This is my favourite story so far! Really REALLY good work! Loved it! What more can I say? *pats on head* you did great :D

hee hee he... fitting punishment... Bwahahaha!

hallucinating.. Sheppy just keeps getting it, doesn't he? You're a tad evil :P

Poor poor Sheppy, it just doesn't seem to have an end, does it?

oh my lord! What's going on?

Aw :)

Yuck, I hate Heightmeyer... she sucks.. :( At least she's better than Kavanagh!