  vjkyf 9/14/03 . chapter 1 it was ok, but did ya make up those children or not? |
| CAt 9/1/03 . chapter 1 LOL that was so funny... i almost laugh my arse off...i can't wait to see the next part... hury...
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 Selena Style 9/14/01 . chapter 1This was soooooooooooooooooooo funny! |
| Yuuki formerly known as the woMan who formerly had a yellow hat 9/8/01 . chapter 1 LUR! That was SO SO funny! LURLURLUR! YAAAAYYY! Write the second chapter soon! Or else I'll pay Sora and Michael the Knaves to follow you around everywhere! BWAHAHAHA! Kudos to u guys! That was realllly cool! |
| daisukefire 8/13/01 . chapter 1 Very funny, I laughed the entire time I read it. I look forward to the next part, if you put it up! |
| Chibi 7/25/01 . chapter 1 you guys really have to write another chapter to this story. All Hail the Rugged Camping Men |
| Lunamew 7/8/01 . chapter 1 After reading this, I am now deeply disturbed and needd a shrink... well... I always needed a shrink... but just in spite of that... I gonna read more stuff like this! |
| Erelyn Tsunami 7/7/01 . chapter 1 That was BRILLIANT! poor koushiro. _ I can't wait 'til the sequel! You think there can be a trequel? Is that an actual WORD? I DON'T KNOW! MWA HA HA HA HA! good story anyway |
| NecareGenesis 6/25/01 . chapter 1 Lol. I can't wait till the next part comes. YOU'VE GOT TO WRITE MORE! Please. |
| Fruitloop Trooper 6/20/01 . chapter 1 Funny story. I'll be looking forward for the sequel. |
| Maitanziao 4/20/01 . chapter 1 That's funny. Write more. I'm feeling monotonous now. Good-bye. Maitanziao. |
| anon 4/17/01 . chapter 1 This was very funny... it was great I really enjoyed it.. I think Umi was really funny.. my favourite part was Princess Prisilla i can so see little kids doing that.. it was great.. I encourage you guys to keep writing.. good luck haha _ «V» |
| Becci 'D 4/16/01 . chapter 1 GET THE NEXT PART UP QUICKLY! PLEASE! |
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