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oh... hatori and male akito! *o* gonna continue reading ^^

I love this fic^^
One of the best of this pairing :D

ok,that was truely DESTERPING!*_* but,but i loved it.you have a sick bent mind,oh well so do i.well ok,then let's leave these two alone for a while...

Er... it's not shonen-ai... Akito is a girl.

so there is going to be a sequel to this? i hope that it is. i really like this story. now akito was a little crazy and messed up in this fanfic. but then again i guess that he always is...please write more soon. thanks and bye:D

Hey, Akito is the Zodiac God and everything, right...? That means he can't transform into an animal and stuff...? And what's with the whole "Akito-being-a-girl-spoiler-thing"? What's up with that? What spoiler? I don't understand TT.TT

Lol when he said "Remember when your loyalties lie" I thought of Voldemort XD

omg that was awesome keep on writing!^-^

Wow!! What a beautifully written story!

I'm such a sucker for Hatori... ^o^

Thank you so much for the good read

~Ryopon~

I've probably reviewed this already,but if I haven't, well, I'm reviewing it now. I love it!! They go so well together!! I'm now reading 'Delerious' and I like it so far! I love you're writing style.

Aww...that's horrible! I'd love to hate Akito right now...I'm very close to, but I can't. He's just too...Agh! Akito-sama is too precious to hate.

Poor Kiro. -cries-

Oh my god Raikune, that was absolutely stunning. Towards the end, when Hatori was telling Kiro he could forget what had happened, I started crying. I don't know what made that part so sad but my eyes are wet and I'm all choked up...wow. I know I sound like a babbling retard but I'm so amazed by this fic and your talent. As I've said, the whole Akito-as-an-actual-god-goddamn-it concept is really spiffy. And hot. ^^ I love how you manage to describe Akito in a new way every time you do it, and I love how not everyone can love him...but Hatori can. Of course he can. SPECTACULAR job. My only complaint is that it's over, but one can't go on forever I guess. I'm...shocked and appalled that you haven't gotten any reviews, and once I force Fruits Basket down the throats of two of my friends at school, I'll send them straight to your fanfic. ^^ Agh. I wish I could write this well, this is like six billion times better than EWH...anyway I'll shut up now. One can't go on forever, like I said. Oh god I'm still crying. Okay, bye. Great job!

*sniffs* That was really good and it was sad. I loved this chapter and this story. It was very lovely and I'm really sad that it is over. I was hoping that it could go on and on and on and on and on forever. It was that good. I never wanted it to end but it did and it was beautiful.

gah stupid akito die you MF!! die!! poor kiro!! i'll always think your hot!! if hatori doesnt take care of kiro ima smack the seahorse outta him!