OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! It's so good! I wish the next chapter would come out soon!

Subaru è il solito adorabile, Seishiro il solito tonto... xD
Una costruttiva conversazione sui draghi della terra... Certo che se Hokuto decide di fare da cupido a Satsuki e Yuuto ci sarà da divertirsi... O_ò;; o forse non tanto...

"You're completely right at being worried for the future..."

Arg, non dire così... T__T;

Lol! Kamui/Fuuma is totally Wishmaster.

It's always interested me how the Ten no Ryu and Chi no Ryu often seem to desire to be with each other more than they desire to destroy each other, and yet generally they totally fail to take matters into their own hands.

i'm so happy you've updated! :) Subaru and Seishirou's relationship is getting more and more adorable/cute/ sweet :). they're just so perfect together! i smell something bad, soon.

the battle at Rainbow Bridge is getting nearer, isn't it? damn it! Subaru is gonna get his ** kicked by Kamui, isn't he? and Sei-chan will come to the rescue, before it's to late and save him! *fingers crossed!* it can't end like in the manga! i just can't!

Phwee, this story has been in my bookmarks of to-read for a very long time... And I finally got time to get around to it!

I have to say that in the beginning, maybe the first ten chapters or so, I was prone to glancing away from them. They weren't exactly boring, but they seemed to just go over events in X that I've already memorized.

However, as it progressed it became more interesting, especially after Hokuto came into the picture and she and Seishirou went into a friendly/deadly charade with each other. Those were up moments and made me smile.

And two chapters back... was when I gasped... I thought you were about to pull out a Tokyo Babylon reenactment when Fuuma tried to attack Subaru! First I thought that he really was going to stab Subaru and take out his eye, then thought, "No, that wouldn't make sense... he would have no reason to wish to lose his eye." Then I thought... "Oh no she isn't!!" I was completely convinced that you would have Seishirou protect Subaru and lose his right eye, therefor sticking Subaru in an angst pit and making Seishirou feel accomplished because he had protected Subaru successfully and wouldn't have to 'never forgive himself.'

I don't know if I'm elated or disappointed at that. But it sure worked me up!

I personally don't like that Fuuma is viewed so badly by everyone, because I think he's such an amazing character and I love how he's originally portrayed in X [I don't believe he would ever rape someone o_o ... except maybe Kamui]. But ah well. This is him being 'twisted,' so...

I also have my personal preferences about a few things, but my complaints are none too important, as your fic has captured my interest greatly.

I hope to see another chapter soon ^_^ I'm anticipating what you'll write when X16 rolls along...

Aand I'll end my long, hopefully balanced review there to go get some sleep... I've been nodding off, but was determined to finish reading this xD

Needless to say the sei/su part in this was so good, so I would just like to commend you that you weave in the original seishirou-subaru-hokuto relationship really well. Also, how you twist the kakyou-hokuto relationship to fit the change in circumstance is perfect. I cant wait to read more.

year you're absolutely right^^

thank you once again for a wonderfull new chapter^^ you are really good at descriping the persons, their feelings and their thoughts, you really have a deep understanding of everyones caracters and I really enjoy reading it so thank you very much^^

loved it

Even though this chapter was mainly talking, I enjoyed it. I like how Seishiro and Subaru snuggle together in front of everyone. And with the bit with Inuki, I was actually expecting everyone to be surprised that Subaru and Seishiro could see and touch the dog. (But I suppose that is because I really have no interest in any of the other characters, so can't remember much about their story lines... naughty me.).

I look forward to the next part! :)

There's just so many things I loved about this chapter. First, I adore the way Subaru and Seishirou snuggled during the party-- it was so cute. I also liked the conversation they had about the other angels and what they hold dear. Great chapter!

three words: I FREAKING LOVE THIS(or was that four I didn't really count ;) hehe)

thank you so much Subaru is adorable^^

E finalmente Seishiro e Subaru sono riusciti a parlare un po'... :) Anche se sono molto preoccupata per il futuro, speriamo bene...
Continua presto!^^

Che dire, ADORO Subaru che da dell'idiota a Seishiro... xDD
Per quanto riguarda Fuuma e la battaglia se l'è cavata meglio di quanto m'aspettassi, temevo che ritrovandosi faccia a faccia con lui non riuscisse a muovere un muscolo...
Aspetto con ansia il prossimo cap... ;)

I can see that endangering Seishiro would drive Subaru to do anything to protect him. poor world.

Please write more soon. :)

is it just me or is subaru's fight with fuuma getting dangerously close... damn it! it's probly 2 chapters away isn't it? :) loved this chapter and i love how they're progressing in their new relationship.. and Sei-chan's denial is so cute, though as i see it he's getting more and more conscious of his feelings.