ha-ha! what a funny fanfic! pie eating contest! i couldn't have even eaten a whole pie if i was there! and dorm two would really lose with me..but, i think that dorm 2 should have won in this fanfic.. after all, sano and ahiya did eat a lot..

Umeda is hilarious!

Cute very cute!Love the ending!:)

Hehe, that was really cute. I love how the story progressed from beginning to end. Very nice!

This looks good! Keep writing! Poor Sano, always getting dragged into things.

Unheard

PS After I was finished reading this chapter, at the bottom of the page there was an advirtisment on Maple Syrup Pie. Interesting on the timing for that.

aw hehe that was so good! Kawaii desu! Great story.

Aw Kawaii!

THAT WAS AWESOME!Damn you...I feel like I want a really really huge pie right now...ooh, the sugar (_

Well? Please post soon!

The only thing I have to complain about at this point is that recent chapters have been so short; I want to read more! O_o Other than that, I have nothing to criticize... your grammar/spelling is beautiful, and your characterizations are perfect. Now... write! More! :D

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Aww that was short. please post soon. _

this is going to be funny

Please post soon. Yup fits right in the story... _ Can't wait to read more.

Oh, this is good, I can't wait to read more