really REALLY choppy, no emotions whatsoever caused it to be short, but your general plot is good, you just have to dig up those details and smooth it out.

i think the frist one better. cause techinicily(sp?) twins don't have the same DNA just like they don't have the same fingerprints.

I like the clone idea more, to me it seems more plausible. But that's just me...

I was wondering when somebody would finally come up with the clone idea. Okay plot, but I really like angst.

Well...that was what I was sort of thinkingm, I mean they sound EXACTLY the same, except for Red X has a voice scrambler tihngy...anyway, I like this ending, but I haven't seen the other one so...yeah...

Well, I think the previous one did a much better job. Having a Boy Wonder twin instead of clone would be just plain ol' freaky. _

Foolio. That's pretty cool, a Robin clone to come and step into the picture. Keep writing!

These cliffhangers are killing me dude! Gah!

WEll, another good chapter in the saga ((It's saga, yes?)). Anyway, update soon! How many stories are you going to make this into?

Kewl. Keep em coming!

As for coupling, let's just say the less romance the better. I'm getting annoyed of all the Rea/BB or Star/Robin or god (or whoever you belive in) forbid Slade and Rae, or something like that...Well, I like cute romance, like small amounts of fluff (not a lot), but no "I love you, I cannot live withtout you!" kinda stuff, That is just getting annoying...okay, enough on that topic...nice chapter...that was an original solution to Terra's petrification. I am so happy, I got a story partially dedicated to me! *smiles, very big smile* *then spins around in swirly chair* Keep going, yuor doing great. Also, I have no constuctive critisism to give you. Nope, none at all.

Cool! You ask for couples? Usuall I base it off behavoirs like who acts nice to who and stuff like that. But definitely Rob Star and depending BBRAETER beacuse Raven acts like she hates Beast Boy. in my opinion, these are the best pairs and Cyborg...well...all his girls are either on the other side of the country or Evil. So, I gave you my opinion and I wonder how it will play out? Good job by the way and keep up the good work.

you write good

Ah, the second story in the saga. I liked it so far, but beginnings can be misleading.

YAY! BB gets a friend back! I like! Keep up the good work.