That was a really beautifull Oneshot! I wonder how senritsu looks in her true form. I have draw a lot of pictures with her, but it alway do not looks how I imigaed.hm.
Whatever, she must be beautifull ^^
I like to read your oneshot, it have not this "happy end" ending- its more like an "open end"

Omg.. this is like so.. so.. sad. :( i dunno why, but it made me real sad. Perhaps because of the atmosphere, the strained silence between them, or simply because you are one heck of a writer. :D

This is the first KuraSen fic I've ever read, and I must say I'm not really a fan of the pairing. But reading your work made me think otherwise. Now Im off to searching more on this pair.

Thanks for sharing this with us.
Hope you write more.

This is so beautifully written. Very angsty, with much of the two's suffering, but still sweet in a comforting way. Things won't be the same, but I hope things turn out all right for them in the end.

I'm still curious to see Senritsu in her original form, but I love her just the way she is. Loved the fic. Please write more KuraSen-related fics, DW-chan! ^^

Beautifully written. I prefer Leorio/Kurapika as a couple, but if it's anyone else, it's Senritsu. I've been wanting to see a fic of them because that just makes so much more sense than Kuroro or Neon; it could fit, it could work. And Senritsu is the nicest person ever, I love her. I didn't think there were any though. But now there's two.
I love your descriptions; your fic enveloped me in a sense of silence and rain and windshield wipers. Most people don't do this kind of thing. And calling them a young man and a young woman at once made Kurapika seem mature and strong and Senritsu seem young, which she probably really is despite her disfigurement. I also like that she wasn't insanely beautiful when she reversed her curse, but to Kurapika she was anyway. A true sign of love. And that they both had battle scars and that reversing the curse had consequences (poor Senritsu though O_O). But so you skate the line between 'la la perfect happy life' and 'omgz I am full of angst' masterfully.

Wow, this was really sad and weet.

I think the writing-style is a bit fancier than it has to be at times, but that's just a matter of my personal tastes. ^^; It's overall a lovely work. The end felt so warm, despite the bittersweet reality.

wow, a beautifully written piece indeed! Although I'm not exactly a KuraSen shipper (in fact, I'm not a shipper for any pairing really), I have to compliment on your ability to word their care for each other so subtly, .. I guess the word I'm looking for is elegance. Each word you used to describe the movement of Kurapica towards Senritsu flows so naturally, like water down the Falls... highly impressed and looking forward to sampling your future works. Hopefully work projects won't hinder you too much, and I wish you many plot bunnies to hop your way :)

oh. my. gosh.

YOU ARE BACK! after all these years [?!] ...

*hem* anyway...

oh. my. gosh. again.

this is just amazing... not only your return but also your 'first' written fanfic AFTER you have returned... not to mention, a very VERY well written one... KuraSen rocks! XD i hope there will be more supporters of this wonderful pairing... more power to you, DW-chan! hope you'll write more... hehe... ^~