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sinnerman3
2008-10-04
ch 5,
abuseWhile I realise there is nothing remotely funny about Tom, there were a few sentences spoken in the Chamer that reminded me of Lockheart...Magical Me..the greatest wizard etc. Only Tom WAS powerful, and not just in his mind (if that's what anyone chooses to call it). I liked your version of the Chamber of Secrets.

Harry is about as clueless as they come, and the wand and holster talk was hysterical...lord only knnows what the remainder of Sirius' talk with Ginny was about.
pottersavvydame
2008-10-03
ch 17,
abuseHey! Love your story...Its VERY interesting & funny. Love the way you portray Harry. He's so Cute...and I love how ginny interacts with him.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!


Keep it up.

~^~P~^~
OwlofNight
2008-10-01
ch 1,
abuseHey, great story keep it up
Samantha
2008-10-01
ch 17, anon.
abuseI was very excited to see that you had updated and, as always, the chapter was hysterical and entertaining. I don't have any criticism although I would like to note that your inner dialogue as Harry thwarted the theft attempts brought a HUGE smile to my face. It was brilliant.
inuficcrzy
2008-09-28
ch 17,
abusegreat to hear more from you, and what a wrench you've possibly thrown into the works here.

this ought to be very interesting to see how it turns out!!
Kelss6692
2008-09-28
ch 17,
abusehello! First, let me say that i read the first 13 chapters of this story a ridiculously long time ago, and then recently stumbled upon it again! and i am so glad that i did! AMAZING! I love Harry and Ginny's relationship, it seems so natural and normal--great job writing that (and their 'lessons' in the room of requirement) I am a little nervous about this new mission of his...not so good... OH! and the harry vs. ginny competition was PERFECT! i love this story! please update soon!
Doglover9383
2008-09-27
ch 17,
abusethis story is friggin amazing cant wait for the next chapter
powerhungry
2008-09-27
ch 17,
abusethis story is so cool
powerhungry
2008-09-26
ch 14,
abusethis story is so freakin funny!
Royukl
2008-09-26
ch 17,
abuseI'm glad you've decided to stick this out. I hate half-finished stories, and I'm happy this one will not end of up as. Mostly because it's so good. Update soon! I look forward to the next chapter
ChristinaAngel
2008-09-26
ch 17,
abuseLoved this chapter, I liked how Harry has himself a little fan and his worry over how Ginny will react (I can't wait to see that) and I loved Ginny's description of him as an angel and how she's helping him. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Cherry Lollipop and Skittle...
2008-09-26
ch 17,
abusehaha i thought this chapter was funny, expecially during the end. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Jekiam
2008-09-26
ch 17,
abuseAmusing. Exceedingly amusing.

You write a good story with puns in all of the right places.
OwlofNight
2008-09-25
ch 17,
abusegreat story so far, when she introduces him to sex it should be quite interesting.
HP-HANN
2008-09-24
ch 17,
abuseomg i luv your story i hav only read up 2 chapter 3 but i absolutely luv it
i dont no if u hav finished or still going with the story because i hav only read up to chapter 3 but if u hav finished prety please write sum more stories and if your still going please dont abandon the story-i hate it when peple do that.
Luv hannah
p.s did u no that u last updated on my birthday, kool huh
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