aw. that was so cool and sexy... so-seifer-y! keep writing! i do loved the flavor you put in this fic!

awh. i like reading stories behind seifer's necklace.

this was nice.

good job.

Pretty coo;, Chickie. Neat.

...Nice! I want closure!

That was so adorable! So simple but so adorable! You're a good writer! Excellent one shot.

That was cute. Made me laugh too. It's not one of those extremely fluffy, sickeningly sweet kind of things where it's like AW OMG IT'S SO CUTE! And I'm glad. It's one of those things that you laugh at. I found it very amusing - awesome job! I really liked it. )

Nice little story, with a tense ending. The build-up was very well paced and led up to the climax without giving the ending away. Seifer running away rather than facing his feelings and Quistis' is very in-character.

Oh, and you score 10/10 for spelling, grammar and syntax!

Not so keen on the swearing - I don't find it necessary - but it doesn't detract from the story. And I would imagine that's how Seifer would talk, anyway!

great job! u know, i never really paid any attention to seifer's necklace before. it was always about "hyperion, hyperion, blah blah blah." also, its cute how quistis ends up wearing it. _ are u going to update?

Oh! That was such a sweet story, and the ending was so sad, do you think you'll ever continue it or leave it as a one shot?