I loved the story and Bill and Remus and Severus in it. Thank you very much!

Hello^^
I've read the french translation of Herema of "the Measure of a Man" and before sending a review to the translator, I wanted to send one for you.

I really had a lot of pleasure to read your OS, and just for it, I think you're a genius. I've read a lot of fictions in different languages but just few of them had caught me like yours.
An interesting story, fine and very well descriptions, a little bit of humor and coherence... It's near of the perfection, on my mind^^

So... congratulations for your story, it's awsome and amazing. Thank you very much for having written it.
Kisses from the French West Indies.

AoT

(and sorry for the mistakes...^^')

A very exciting story! I did notice a few misspellings & typos - I can't help myself (like Adrian Monk says: it's a blessing... and a curse). But they didn't distract much from what is a well-told tale and a gripping plot. Another lovely bit of work - thanks for posting it.

That was a great read. I loved their interaction. It was genuine and real and not too rushed. Odd pairing that worked very well at the author's talent.
Great fic.
:-)

Thank you for this story. I really enjoy reading your work. You did a great job with Remus' and Bill's characters.
In fact, I would love to translate it in French. Would you agree?
I think the French community on FFnet would love reading 'The measure of a man' just as much as I did.
If you don't want, no probs. If you hesitate, just ask me whatever you want, I wrote my e-mail adress with this review. If you want some details, same thing.
I'm not in a hurry at all, just take your time to think about it.

Thank you, and good luck for you future writing works.

Hemera

love it!

Oh yes! An absolutely great story, way to go!

Brilliant. I love this fic. Love it, love it, love it. I love the way you characterized Bill and Remus, I love the relationship dynamic between Remus and Severus, I love how this story manages to be thoroughly plot-driven and thoroughly character-driven at the same time. I was going to write a Remus/Bill myself, that's how I found this fic, but I'm no longer sure if I'm up to the task, you've left rather big shoes to fill. Bloody excellent work of fiction.

However, not perfect. I have only two small suggestions:

1. The plot, while extremely original and engaging, tends to move along in huge sort of lurches that leave the reader a tad disoriented and sometimes require a second reading. I may have only been confused because I was reading this with a fever of about 101, but I was still a tad confused.

2. There were enough small spelling, punctuation, and gramatical errors for me to notice. Just minor things like "said Bill with a grinned" instead of "said Bill wiht a grin" and "wave" instead of "waive." Maybe you should have an additional proofreader or two?

Still, can't complain. This is one of the best things I've read on fanfiction in a long, long time. Thank you.

*hurries off to see what else you've written*

-JCJules

What a story! Definitely one of the best I read!
I like the way Remus and Severus still care and look out for each other.
And the suspense is also good, it reads like a real detective story.

Lovely story! I like the bit about Charlie: "Dragons aren't sufficiently life-threatening?" in re Severus. Well, a lot of Gryffs _are_ danger junkies!

Glad to see Remus happy.

Sequel?

That was beautiful! I hadn't really considered this pairing but it makes sense.

I do hope you'll write a companion piece with Severus and Charlie. *wink*

I liked your fic very much because of the humor and the traces of a detective novel in a not-too-long story! The way Severus and Remus were behaving around each other was just great. What I missed a bit was an explanation about Bill, because he himself was bitten by Greyback, wasn't he (although in human form)?
All in all it was one of your very special stories I like so much!
Thank you for letting me forget I have to do homework! ;-) And of course the story in itself!
Yours,
Meta

Ah, this was a refreshing story. Severus just the way I love him (snarky), my beloved Remus, and Bill in all his Weasley glory. Aside from a lack of transitional markings between scenes, this was a wonderful story.

Erudite without being pedantic, sharp visuals, dead-on dialogue, clockwork perfect plot; all as usual! Loved it! Thanks for writing and sharing. :)