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| GroveWolf 2006-03-08 ch 2,  | abusehow long has it been since you updated? seriously |
| Andy 2005-09-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseyou're doing good with this, keep it up. as for Rei... whatever yoou think is best man. and don't worry so much. I look forwrd to your next update. |
| unknown 2005-09-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is a very good story so far. Just love the setting the story takes place in. Hope you make this a Shinji/Rei story. If your not going to then please make another that has a good setting like this. The bartender name and location remind of Dynasty Warrior games, is this sorta from that. |
| Rusty Knights Productions 2005-09-03 ch 2, | abuseThis fic seems promising. It's nice to find some fics that have new ideas. Good to find author who likes Mana, by the way. -Knight 2 |
| Andy 2005-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was AWESOME! I always love it when people put Eva in a Fantasy setting. |
| vic 2005-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseif you need an interesting, detailed and easy to read internet source of east asia history, just look it up on wikipedia. guns came in the mid 15 hundreds, but it wasn't till the opium war that was started by the british sometime in the 19th century(1800's) that drugs were an issue. nice story, by the way, but i expected asuka to be a bit less accepting of her postition as a sex slave of sorts, especially if she reacts like that because shinji noticed that her dress came undone. it does make sense, however, that she knows three languages. in the series she already was a college grad, and was bilingual. 3 languages shouldn't be too much of a challenge for her |
| nick2951 2005-08-31 ch 1, | abuseIt is certainly an original idea. I look forward to you updating this. |