Amazing story, please write more soon and it kinda sad to think Mikey as a ghost but then again it was kinda funny him being one.

I love it. ^_^

wow, so awesome! great job! glad it wasn't Raph's fault, sad that Mike died though! makes for a good story though, great, i love it!!

Overall, I've enjoyed this story. The ending could be even better if you draw it out a bit. I mean, here Raph has made contact with his long dead brother. I'd think Raph would have a hard time letting him 'pass on'. I would think he would want Mike's spirit to stick around awhile. If you play up this little dramatic bit, the scene where Mike does pass on will be more powerful.

Oh Mikey! I'm so glad he told Raph it wasn't his fault. And that his bro's are helping him. Have I metioned how much I love this fic? Several times you say? Mind if I say it again? I LOVE THIS! Sad yet optimistic.

Awh, great writing, and I can't wait for the epilogue!

well now, when we put the chapters all together, that was an awful quick and shoirt story, but also with a ghostly touch, ne? :3

not bad, I'm glad to see that Raphie boy isnt blaming himself, and to be honest? for some time, I thought Mik's ghost would follow his brothers for a few more chapters and maybe even cause trouble, but I guessed wrong... ah well, anyway, good job :D

I love it. ^_^

oh, poor Raph! that would really suck! keep going!

Oh No you did not just end it there?! That was cold, but anyways I love your story please oh please update ASAP!! PLEASE I beg of you update this thing ASAP!! Oh poor Raphie can't imagine whats going to come next for the poor turtle tot! *gives chibi Raph a great big hug!* Once again great story and please update soon.

Oh, great chapter! Poor Raph, and he didn't even know... looking forward to more soon!

Oh!
Scary-ish!

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--Queen of the Gnomes,
NumbuhZero

Aw! Poor Raphie! Poor Mikey! Much sadness. *Pats LG on the head* Good job!

That was both funny and sad at the same time. The turtle tots acted just like little kids would. But I feel sorry for Raph, finding out he caused Mikey to run out of the lair.

Sucks to be Raphie doesn't it? How could he possibly live with himself knowing that his argument over the picture is what caused Mikey to chase after him. And you still killed my guy off! Shame on you! Oh well, kudos on a job well done. Although you've a typo. Towards the beginning of the chapter, it says the four young turtles instead of the three young turtles. You might want to go back and fix that LG. ^_^