That was sad -cries-...But wonderful job! Thanks for posting.

I. Positively. Bawled.

I hate you! This fanfiction was complete crap. Even Mine are better than this and i suck. The writing was good, and the story was good but the damn eding sucked... and goddAMN IT YOU MADE ME CRY! and i'm supposed to be a dAMN ROCK! I REALLY REALLY HATE YOU!

Rowan: That scene where Ed is inside Al's armor and Al wants to prove that Ed should have faith in him, was incredible. I've never read such an alluring "sex" scene before; that one was handled so well. I mean, you didn't even cheat and just say, "look, Al's got his body back, now let's watch 'em screw." You wrote that situation perfectly. I don't really know how to say it, but that was the epitome of something truly marvolous. I love it. Brilliant.

nice.

NO! ::wails:: That is so sad!

you write E,E,n E slash too don't you? (insane laughter)
I'll read anything with an Ed in it.

Wow. You're my hero. It's one of those where he's still in the armor and you actually made it WORK. That and it was just awesome. I applaud you.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. The characterazation, the sadness, everything. I'm almost in tears, and that is very rare that I am in tears from reading a fic. Please tell me there is a second chapter.

*Deep breath*

Once again, I am left in awe and nearly in tears (which is a feat unto itself). Your writing is beautiful, your characterizations are perfect, and just the whole fic is wonderful. I really wish you'd write more in the FMA fandom (yes, I'm officially obsessed and amazing fics like this just make my year).

oh! That was so sad! T_T I feel so bad for Al...Ed thinks he's doing the right thing, but he just isn't!
:( Anyways, the writing on this story is amazing, and I absolutely love this pairing! Keep up the good work!

oh,thats so sweet i like that there was depth to it not just some stupid smut drabble

That was so sad I loved it!! Is there going to be a chapter two?? It was so beautiful!!

*cries* That's so sad! It was simply amazing and it leaves you aching for more. I love angst, and you did it beautifully. And this was one of the few times I've actually yearned for a happy conclusion... Simply wonderful. ^_^ You write beautifully.

Wow. Excellent. Good job.