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6ftTiny
2006-08-26 . chapter 11
*stands by Phil's bed with tha bloody axe and Corey #8's old mask on*Oh was it a dream,or was it something more?
6ftTiny
2006-08-26 . chapter 10
*falls with parachute after the last surviving chickens and Cyborg and his cheese mob,clitching an axe behind back*Hehehe...*sings* I push my fingers into my eyes...It's the only thing that slowly stops the ache...If the pain goes on,I'M NOT GONNA MAKE IT!...Put me back together...or separate the skin from bone...live me all the pieces...and so on...*kills chickens with axe*SLIP-TICKY'S ON A RAMPAGE!FEAR HIM!

Still more funny and weird stuff.I'm gonna write me a OOC chapter,you know.
6ftTiny
2006-08-26 . chapter 9
TENSION,TENSION,TENSION...

Where shal the plane go,where,oh,where?!*goes clinicaly insane*IT'S GOING TO HELL,THAT'S WHERE IT'S GOING!

Slip-Ticky got out...again...Oh,shup up!Here's your "Wait and bleed"*turns MP3 player on*
6ftTiny
2006-08-26 . chapter 7
Soy sauce?!*colapses*
6ftTiny
2006-08-26 . chapter 6
Poor chicken...Poor Dani.9Cy,s heavy,man,even heavyer than Slipknot and all the others together.

...

AND DARE THEY THROW OUT DANI,DAVE AND THE WHOLE SLIPKNOT BAND?!*kills waiter by stabbing him to death with a #2 pencil*
6ftTiny
2006-08-26 . chapter 5
Dude,you could have just asked for some help.
I've got some dudes and dudets here-they sing,write and play the guitars good.I'm a good vocal(wouldn't you believe it),we could heve cooked something up.

No matter,Phil won and the cheese crew sucked,so...HA-HA!*jumps out of window*
6ftTiny
2006-08-26 . chapter 4
OK,OK,JUST LET GO OF ME!I'LL REVIEW!...*DeathMetal99 holds on to Ony Sirit's legs not letting go,still begging.*OK,I've had ENOUGH!!*wrips through pocket,until he finds what he is looking for-a giant mallet with an evil smilie on the front side*LET ME GO!"whacks DM99 over the head*...How can one boy be so pushy?

OK,I'm inviting you in my C2,this chapter convinced me that you have what it takes.We will have to work on the typos,but otherwise it's perfect.
6ftTiny
2006-08-26 . chapter 3
I WAS ONE OF THOSE GOTHS!I WAS THE ONE IN THE CORNER LEFT ON THE RIGHT BEHIND THE SECOND ONE IN THE EIGHT LINE OF THE FOURTH PART OF OUR MIGHTY LEGION!...Well,actually,I wasn't,but...HELL,can't a guy dream anymore?!

OK,so,this chapter was just plain randomly crazy.One more like this one and you are in my C2!
6ftTiny
2006-08-26 . chapter 2
WHA!FreakY with a capital "E"!Jesus,what demon possesed you,dude?!...'Cuz I like it,it's just freakishly funny and I like funny.
6ftTiny
2006-08-26 . chapter 1
DUDE!...I mean, DUDE!You're just like me!...Wel,almost,if we aren't counting that although I am a heavy metal freakl,I dress like your everyday popular prep,but whatever,looks aren't important!I too have trouble singing "Cradle of Filth" songs (dude,if you can get the vice right,you get a smile on the radio from me :P)But the most important thig is...WE ARE BOTH EUROPEANS!YEAH! HI FIVE!...Well,I'm Bulgarian,but we are from Europe nontheless.

Now this fic looks very promising,I'll keep reading and see what "Phil" does next.I you want some material to read,you are free to check my fic out.In it you will find some bad grammar,much,much more,even more and TOO MUCH BLOOD and violance!Also a heavy metal loving ex-assassin and so on.One thing you won't like is the BBXTerra,but I think the rest you will love.

P.S.Sorry that tis review turned out to be more of a intro,but I couldn't ignore the fact that there is a fellow Slipknotian out there.
World of Nightmares
2006-04-09 . chapter 11
wel at least you finished it, and YEA SEQUAL! dude u seriously got to get rid of the annonyomus review thigy.
R 4 V E N
2006-04-04 . chapter 11
"Oh gingersnaps..."

ha. now i'm gonna have to use that more often cause of you! XD
camba precoz
2006-01-04 . chapter 10
man, pleez finish the fakin story rigt now or i have sex with a pie. kill a moron and maaged to fight da dawg heded human half robotic villain known as cy bark da k9and hes frind fantastic ** fanny, ad i will lose, you know? keep it up ad write forever.
camba precoz
2006-01-04 . chapter 8
deathmetal, i'm gonna read every tt fic you do, it is for my latino honor, if the serious guy dont quit **' ill keel their asses.
Rotten Core
2006-01-03 . chapter 10
Those chickens are awsome, if I could I would join them.
Muhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha...Uhm I'm done...bye
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