wow. u wrote beautifully. this story could have been an excerpt from SNAKECHARM. excellent. it's absolutely fabulous.

Very, very good. One small error - Danica was not the only heir when Anjay was killed. She still had her brother, and (presumabley) her sister. Other than that it was fantastic.

And I would love to read your other story!

I have began to start a new category for the Kiesha'Ra Volumes if you'd like to reply to it in the FAQ thing. I really don't understand how that thing works, but anyway...

This is lovely and well in character. For the Alasdair story, read Falcondance for a lot of info that should help you in that fanfic.

I always wondered about that night when he came to kill Danica but he thinks '...that night I fell in love'. Loved it how you kept him in character and executed this.

If you wish for me to Private Message you the important facts for that Alasdair fic, you can..I read that entire book in one day, lol.

Hope you upload that new fic soon, I'd love to read it!

- Notebook

That was cute... They're such a cute couple.. .

This is wicked good. Emphasis on the wicked. I like how the title just sounds like you made it up and it sounded smart when you first started reading (sorry), but then it completely made sense at the end. (Did that make any sense to you?). And then four years later...HAWKSONG! Love that book.

Wow, that is *really* touching, it is even almost exactly his thoughts in Snakecharm . . . . . hm . . . . anyways, very good.

Ok, I've concluded I've met a literary genius. Why aren't you out there raking in the cash yet?! XD

And after reading your profile, I conclude you are the COOLEST. Man, you like the same books and the same music and everything like me! XD

...lmao, I think I might be giving off a stalkerish vibe... sorry. >.< M, out of curiousity, do you like Anne McCaffrey? Dragonriders of Pern? If so... you HAVE to join one or two of mine and my other online buddies websites. You'd make things a lot more interesting with your writing skills... We've about maybe five people with skills as great as yours.

If you haven't read the series, that's fine, it's easy to get into just role-playing things... lol. If your interested, just e-mail me, it's my author name @ ^^ Thanks, and talk to ya later!

~~Jamie

Awesome. I love this series. To know someone's writing about it besides my soon-to-be story...(angels sing). Awesome.

I have to admit- I'm hooked on your writing. I would definately be interested in that Alasdair fic. Great job with this one, totally believable, and it flows great. You are now officially one of my favorite fanfic authors, which is why i'm reveiwing, i usually don't. I love your stories! I also read your profile...great books, all of them.

OH...
MY...
GOD.

Seriously, I almost cried, and I think I nearly am. That is TALENT. Pure and out there. I feel blessed with the fact that I got a chance to read this. Please, PLEASE write more stories so I can worship you again.
Love from the depths of my writing heart,
RohanianRidr

great job. please continue

I hope you've read FALCONDANCE to write the other story because alot of questions were answered there. I also would LOVE to read it if you don't mind.

really well written...yes, i think we all would be interested in Alasdair's life...good story.

This is awesome. It wasn't very unique but the way you wrote it kept me interested. You should do a sequel or something. Keep up the good work.

this is a very good FF for a one shot story. I loved the book Hawksong and im planning to read the Snakecharm book but idk if there is more after that. I really think this was actually what Atwaters-Rhodes was wanting Zane to think when Gregory died even though it did not say in the original book. This was a great story and I liked it alot. I hope you plan to make more Hawksong FF's as I am tryin to ryte now except i only have ideas :-( keep up the good work!