 threehoursofsleep 2009-04-25 . chapter 5Wow. That was intense, yeah it better not be like two years or I'll have to kill you. :D
I'm so uber excited for the next chapter! This story really needs more love, it feels so...deep I dunno. You're amazing. Oh, and for some reason while I read this I thought of "The Scientist" by Coldplay. |
 threehoursofsleep 2009-04-25 . chapter 4Wow. Just wow. You're really amazing, the way you write. I think I don't understand most of what's going on here really, only vaguely do I get it, but I really like it. It's like with some stories I find myself bored, and I realize somewhere that I should be but it's just mesmerizing to read your stuff.
Win. |
 Leiral 2008-08-21 . chapter 5 This story is wonderful. Everything about it is in character and i find it hard to believe that you don't have more reviews. |
 poornmiserable 2008-08-05 . chapter 5 cant wait til naruto confronts sakura i dont know what to expect...its funny how sasuke is the damsel in distress please update soon pretty please
laterz |
 poornmiserable 2008-07-24 . chapter 4 omg omg omg what is gonna happen next...sakura couldn't let the boys have all the fun now could she...im a little confused what exactly was sasuke doing with that summoning jutsu thing at the temple, what was the purpose of it? anywho keep up the great work update soon please please |
 icyhiei 2006-08-12 . chapter 2This is an interesting story. Was that the temple that Sasuke went to once? Did Naruto follow him and that was the energy, Naruto and Sasuke? And Sakura was supposed to be following Naruto? I can't wait to read more. You said in the summery that it was narutosakurasasuke, did you mean it was a triangle or all of them together? I hope its the second. I can't wait to read more! |
 Cayenne 2006-02-26 . chapter 2Great story. It was your illustrations that brought me here, so I have to express my delight on finding those as well. I hope your writer's block goes away soon! |
 ikl 2006-02-21 . chapter 2 really, really, good. hope you write more! |
 Goosegurl 2005-11-28 . chapter 2Is Sakura Sasuke searching? o.o |
 frakalakalaka 2005-11-28 . chapter 1 On an empty stomach laced with demon Chakra, alcohol was a ** to maintain. It had only taken one serving to make his throat burn and his head swim.
Its so interesting what different people think that the affect of alchohol on Naruto will be. XD From it burning up harmlessly to making the fox come out!
Keep up the good work! Yay team7lurve! |
 Mercedes no Inuarai 2005-11-17 . chapter 2This won't be nearly the review you deserve. Some days I'm given to gushing speeches about the virtues of a story. Unfortunately, while this is definately one of those fics; it's not one of those days. -.- Oh well, at least you've managed to encourage me to use proper grammar instead of "OMG, that was so YUM!".
Not that you don't deserve that comment, too. ^.^
What struck me right from the start was your writing style. Not only are you pleasantly literate (too many authors of fanfic aren't), but your exposition is solid with out being "purple prose". Despite not being detail heavy, you have a way of describing scenes and actions that leaves the reader with a concise image of exactly what is going on. I value that much more than those wordy descriptions of the characters' dress and manner. Of course, it helps that you have the illustrations on one version, but I read the version and was still quite pleased. ^.^
Wonderful characterizations of Sakura, Tsunade, Shizune, and Iruka. You really manage to capture their mannerisms, from Tsunade's feigned laziness to Iruka's too innocent smile.
The best word I can use to describe this is "professional". Reading your fic is like reading a published novel. ^.^ It wasn't at all dull and it deserves to be on the best sellers' list. However long it takes you to complete and post the next chapter, I'll be eagerly awaiting to see where this story goes. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
 pippin galadriel moonshine 2005-11-14 . chapter 2Fascinating-I hope for more soon. A good representation of the future, sad but also light in a way. Perfect characterization in my opinion.
Also-'Shishou' really means master (not a term often used and deeply respectful), more than teacher, though it does imply the latter. It would still fit for Tsunade I think, but just thought I'd tell you. |
 gonekrazy3000 2005-10-01 . chapter 1Amazing... This Fic is amazing... Please update soon. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. |
 Kit Spooner 2005-09-25 . chapter 1Lord, I hope you keep writing this. Aside from the story being tantalizing, the art's lovely. |
 Mercedes no Inuarai 2005-09-16 . chapter 1Hmm... Well, I saw your post on the Naruto OT3 LiveJournal and was drawn in by the Team7 pairing (one of my favs), but I can tell this isn't going to be some sappy get-together fic. Which is good because the more intense the angst/drama/plot, the more satisfying the end results. ^_^
First off, I have to commend the beautiful style of this story. It was a joy to read this fic, not only because it was a good story, but also because it was literary and thorough. Between the descriptions of how the alcohol felt/smelt/tasted to Naruto, how everyone looked, and how he himself felt, we’re given a very clear picture of just what kind of mark killing Kabuto has left on him.
I can’t go on enough about how pleased I am with the atmosphere and characterization so far. Even if it’s just a glance or lift of the head, as in Sasuke’s case, the actions speak as loud or louder than the words. You’ve somehow managed to let us know that all of the characters do far, while changed by time, are still themselves.
I can’t wait to see where this goes and what twists the plot takes. I look forward to the next chapter. ^_^ |