aww pelase contiue...dont let edo die...i love him >.<

Ooh.. Very nicely written. It's a great first chapter! Introduction is important for a good story and I can see from your AN that you planned out this. Off to a good start so please continue the work. ;)

Haha. Very nice. Continue with the fanfiction. I like how you keep the symtoms fairy consistant, and you kept it with in line of the television show.

Now, some Ed-lines, eh? Those happen to be my specialty since I seem to randomly act like Ed and spew them out at times. (At least, I THINK I am good at them.)

1. Who are you calling so short that they need to stand on a ladder to prove themselves?

2. Who are you calling a midget that get's mistaken as the -younger- brother?

3. Who are you callign so short that they never need to get their automail lengtened because they would never grow anyways.

4. Who are you calling a pipsqueek midget!?!?!

5. Who are you calling so short that you can't tell him apart from a snowflake!?

6. Who reyou calling so small that when he coughs you comment about 'barking spiders'.

Umm... yeah... I hope any of those will help.

I am glad that SOMEONE is writing with the Tringhams. I love those two.

Keep on writing.

ohh dear, on hold? dammit, update, you!

KEEP WRITING! Please! I wanna see Ed end up with Russell. I see Roy as more of a father-figure to Ed. Besides, there is a BIG age difference there.

I love you and adore you now hurry up and update.

This is pretty good so far, but I really hope Roy gets Ed! GO ROYxED! (RussellxEd is good too, but RoyxEd is the BEST.) Update!

*crying* Despite the fact that I like RoyxEd, I like RussellxEd even more. But I will continue reading your story...*sniff sniff* Life can be so cruel!!

This story is great!! I almost wrote a story like this but I saw that you already had this idea so I didn't post it. I'll try and make a diffrent version of it though! ^.^ But anyway, great story, please update!

hehe, i love it!

thankyou so much for updating i love love love this story there aren't many russellxed's out there...interesting...cool...more!!:)

Oh, yes, you updated very quickly(if you click on my name you'll see I haven't updated my only story since january..:(..) Thanks for the info on the DvDs! I think I'll just watch season two of FMA on Adult Swim, though(they just started and I'm very, very happy!). It's getting great ratings in the poles on their website, so I think they'll be subbing the movies soon, too! I can't wait to finally find out what the heck everyone's talking about when they're writing their stories!
Anyway, I loved this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one!
Update when you can(aka-soon)!

love the new chapter!

great chapter!!
Poor Ed, I hope he gets better soon ^^
PLease, writte the next chapter soon!!

Great story
Please, continue it!
I wanna know what happens with Ed!!
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter ^^