Ever so much better... I thought to look at the 'last updated' date about halfway through my review for your other story, thought about deleting it, but it was the first good criticizable story I'd found in quite a while, and didn't want to waste the opportunity. I was quite surprised when I saw your reply, I was expecting something along the lines of, 'OMFG, you're so mean! Don't you ever look at publish dates?' It was a refreshing change.

- Adi

='( I hate to think of Erik going to Hell when he died. It's just too sad for me...

But this little snippet was exellently writed! Kudos to you!

~Chloe~

Sweet And sad... Very good though. I cant wait to read more of your stories to come!

Ever~Rin

Poor, poor unhappy Erik T_T That made me cry. You did a wonderful job at capturing Leroux!Erik, not many people are able to do that. Wonderful writing!

Wow...that was really depressing but so wonderfully written. I can't believe Erik went to hell...I hope that Hello Darkness doesn't take too much time. I can't wait for that story.

wow. that was really really depressing. omg poor erik! that was just wow and so incredibly deep. just beautiful. i'm so glad you posted something! i hope that hello darkness won't take a terribly long time.

Oh no...that was so, so sad! But so beautifully written! Wow! Erik's in hell? I can't believe it...no...but wow, what a great fic. Beautiful.