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PiRsqrd314159
2009-09-28 . chapter 17
I was wondering if you had any plans to finish this story. I have been rereading some of the stories I had bookmarked and realized this wasn't finished. I read it again and remembered why I liked it, the angst and worry, closure. I hope you have not shelved it forever.
Thanks
Sir Sebastian
2008-01-10 . chapter 17
Awesome work as always. The psychological aspect was handled extremely well and believably.

You seem to be alternating between Jonathon and James as Mr. Dr. P's first name. Might I suggest a Post-It attached to your monitor? :)
Joe Stoppinghem
2008-01-04 . chapter 17
I think it is great you are addressing may issues that are just glossed over too many time. Relationships, marriages, other issues.

Thank you for all that you have done here and for a great story too. (It's nice to get away from the graphic violence in the previous chapters and have a character story for a while.)
Joe Stoppinghem
2008-01-04 . chapter 15
I will admit you have given Bonnie a persona I have never seen before. It is real, believable, honest and one character you want to help if possible.

I have a few more chapters to go to catch up on and I must apologize for not reviewing every chapter.

Thanks
Ran Hakubi
2007-12-30 . chapter 17
Nana! Oh its so good to see her stepping up to help take care of the twins while Andrea and James step back to help themselves through a very rough patch. Lemon squares for all!

Keep on writing in the free world.
spectre666
2007-12-29 . chapter 17
Nice. Good thoughtful chapter. Nana is now ready to assume her role, can't wait.
Thanks
CajunBear73
2007-12-29 . chapter 17
Very, very good discussion (or nearly monologue) with Dr. Simonson and Bonnie. Some very hard truths were touched on with the shambles of life, post Kim's breakdown, in the Possible home; and in Bonnie's life.

Healing and much more being done with the Dr's P, while Bonnie is getting some very important backup from Nana.

Glad to see this one moving along.

CajunBear73
screaming phoenix
2007-12-05 . chapter 16
When I got this update it was because your on my favorite authors list,I haden't read the Bonnie story because I have never had anything but comtempt for the character.She has always been written as selfish,shallow,and bitchey.Not the most pleasent of people to read about.Your story has made her much more that that.Her home life reveals a frightened,insecure child begging for simple affection and getting contempt(from her sisters)and an mostly absent mother who hasen't a clue how to deal with her. Thank you for this story, it's good to have your horizons broaden.
Natasel
2007-12-05 . chapter 16
Your still alive!

Glad to see this is going great.

Solid chapter if a bit short.

Gonna have to pick up the pace to get the story rolling.
CajunBear73
2007-12-05 . chapter 16
It's alive! Mwahahahaha! Cough, cough. Just kidding.

Corners being turned back in Middleton, and confrontations for Bonnie. Pretty tense in that short interlude. Life still going on.

CB73
Ran Hakubi
2007-12-05 . chapter 16
Glad to see you're back in action. I've really enjoyed this story, as well as the whole "Buried" universe. Keep up the good work.
BlueEyedBrigadier
2007-11-22 . chapter 15
Once again, you have blown right past my previous expectations and have delivered a masterful tale of how Kim's descent rippled out into those around her...and how they rebuilt their lives in the aftermath.

Still...just wish you had a chance to do more with this. You left off at an important cliffhanger, but THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE!
Final-Fan
2007-09-20 . chapter 15
Pretty dramatic.
TexasDad
2006-12-16 . chapter 15
Woo-hoo! A new chapter update, the best thing that's happened this week, no kidding!

Thanks for the new chapter, thanks for helping MrsDrP, way to go CG.
AtomicFire
2006-12-15 . chapter 15
Considering what Anne is like later in this storyline it seems like this was the breaking point. It was short but it was done right.
Thanks for the great read!
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