Hello
I was actually thinking about a fic based on the same principe. A poor Kuruta sold as an alive artefact. So I like you story.

And I'm so sorry that you stop.

oh my...that is such a great story~!! I can't wait to read what happen next. Please update soon...

Are you going to add more to this? I really hope you do.

WOW... HunterxHuunter writers r... gd... Plz UPDATE SOON!

update please! :)

^^ Kuropika rox. I find it amusing of sorts that Kurapika ended up following Kuroro's advice anyways...raising his rank to A.
Please update soon! I really enjoy it!

I love this story! Kuropika is my OTP... there's not enough of it! If you say this is crack, this is the best crack I've ever read! I love your writing style, and yes, the dialogue is wonderful! You have such good ideas for the fic- and I love your Kurapica. He actually might be one of my favorite fanfic Kurapicas out there!

waa a good hxh story , today is my lucky day LOL

Kuroro, aristocratic? No... Well, maybe a little bit. I would prefer to think of him as cultured rather than aristocratic. And anyway, he comes off as being the self-educated, highly intellectual, smug little know-it-all sometimes.

That must sting, for Kurapika to be dismissed by Kuroro so easily. But then again, he's extremely weak here. I love how you handled their confrontation, by the way. Kuroro being both amused and stern... he feels like a teacher. Ahaha. And Kurapika should be around 19 here, right? That's still young, so I can totally imagine him flying off the handle like that.

That's just so like Kurapika, to rise to Kuroro's challenge and raise his rank to A. I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen when they meet next. XD

Am rereading. :P And I don't think I've reviewed yet, so I'm dropping one now.

I want to make green comments on select sentences like what you do whenever I send you my drafts. Too bad I can't do that here.

I've just noticed it now - maybe because I haven't read chapter 1 in a while, that your style here reminds me of Good Omens. It's certainly more witty, and has more crack than the style you're using for BoC. It's amazing how you're able to maintain different styles at the same time. :D

As always, perfect grammar and engaging dialogue. The narration is snappy, and while I always complain that your chapters are too short, you're able to show the most important scenes without losing the flow halfway through. Great transitioning.

Now I'm off to fantasize about that pretty picture of Kuroro pinning Kurapika against the wall. XD

love it all your story's and love ya!

you are such a wonderful POV writer (if you can call it that) I mean you have a wonderful way of describing how someone is thinking, and the dialogue you wirte is quit nice, though in this chapter Kurapica sounds a bit stupide, but it's only normal in the situation he's in (and I'n starting ti blabber alot)
waiting for more (greed*shakes her head*)

I think its perfect... Kuroro is very much like how I pictured him to be... Oh pls update faster... I loved this story.. its so cooL~! Keep up the good work.. We need more KuroKura fics here... :D AND you're a really good writer... almost as good as lynlyn~! :D

woah
this is...really...good...o.0
i now will praise you to every person i chance upon and who is unfortunate enough to cross my path.
feel very very flattered.

ahem--
i really loved how you didn't make kuroro and kurapika make out at the first meeting.i know that sounds weird, but too many authors RUSH things too quickly.

Me likey even more!! Keep going person!!

Yay! You updated! I love this story, keep up the good work.
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