lol not half bad =P why didn't you write any more after this?

Beautifully written, especially for an H/G fan to write T/G like *this* ...

You should write T/G more!! =P

- Corpse Bride

Oh, Tommy. Manipulative till the end.

I love his smothering brother-like attitude towards Ginny crossed with his sadistic tendencies. "It'll be alright. Don't worry. I'm here. ... oh, BTW, this is gonna hurt a lot, and I'm thinking everyone in your family needs to die. ... why are you so upset? Here, I will kiss it better for you."

Definitely the cat to the mouse. Which I've always just assumed their relationship to be.

And Ginny, stuck on hero-worship to the end. ... I liked her better that way. HBP did nothing to make her interesting.

It's bad, wrong and embarrassing for girls to like Potter because he's famous. ... except when Ginny does it. Then she becomes the love of his life.

...I'm extremely off track here.

I couldn't find any contact information on you, so I ask here - in this... rather unconstructive review - I have a LV archive named Dystopia at and I was wondering if I could archive this story there? (or as an outside link, if you would prefer.)

swet! I liked it- very nicely done