 WWLAOS 2006-05-17 . chapter 1This was a great little teaser. I loved Drakken's ranting, his dialogue and behavior were both excellent and in-character. Shego was...I don't know, I didn't much care for Shego in this one. Her character seemed a bit too "flat"...but I suppose that happens from time to time with such a short story.
The equations scrawled across the walls were a very nice visual and felt very "Drakken." The final solution and the way it presented itself was also very well scripted.
Great little intermediary. It was an enjoyable read. Besides...you can beat anything with enough math. |
 Princess Ayame-aka AaS 2005-09-08 . chapter 1Poor Drakken. I could have help him solve for X it is so easy(For me that is). I like this story alot but really want to read the Power of Trust. But Good Job anyways! ^_^ |
 AinoMinako 2005-09-02 . chapter 1Ack! I can already see the foreshadowing. Is that how the title (TPoF) comes into play?
Again, it's the best I've ever read. You must work really hard on the plots beforehand and then on the individual parts themselves in order for it to be so amazing. Or it could be dumb skill. Who knows? In any case, it shows.
I was never that good at Algebra... |
 Porphyria-Kris 2005-09-02 . chapter 1 Aw, it's so amusing watching Shego give Drakken pep talks. XD
Something about Drakken's enthusiasm towards plans is so much like a puppy getting all jumpy before you throw the ball to fetch. It's always amusing, so I'm glad to see he's got his old vigor back.
Not so glad to see he figured out that Kim's friends and family helping her is what gives her an edge. *cringe* But it does set things up nicely for the next story. Can't wait to read it. ^_^ |
 the archduke 2005-09-02 . chapter 1nice setup; can't wait to see where it goes (hopefully in the new story!?)--the archduke |
 demon-sword 2005-09-02 . chapter 1o preview. TPoF is going to hav some wicked ass plan. and i hate math. boo math. |
 Jezrianna2.0 2005-09-01 . chapter 1Interesting story (a one shot, I presume?). The intereaction between Drakken and Shego was nicely done, and I liked the bit about the other prisoners taunting Dr. D. The ending was a bit cliched, but Drakken wouldn't be himself if he wasn't aburdly confident. It goes with being a megelomaniac, I guess. Although, given his moodiness (Depths of Despair to On Top of the World in a flash) suggests manic-depressiveness is his real problem. |
 pokey 2005-09-01 . chapter 1You made me all excited that The Power of Friendship is coming(which is probaly the point, so good job there). Can't wait! |
 trecebo 2005-09-01 . chapter 1Drakken is cracking in the cell.
Shego has come for him, oh well.
A chat and some math
Has created a path
For him to go and wreak hell...
OH, and I am so there... |
 mattb3671 2005-09-01 . chapter 1nice! Dr. D, en fuego! Shego, evil pep abounding! gread read! THANKS! |