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| prettiful pout 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseO.O intense... Nice |
| sunnygirl91 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abuseyou write alot of short fanfic, which i like to review more since a person can add more to a story. this could be one of them. maybe try to experiment with thsi one, since it starts out great. you could try to a song fic, or pov's. anyway, great job on ALL your submissions. |
| Caster 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abuseHuh? 0_0 *is sad* Of course, not everything can be fluff, but wow, it was so short and sucker punch-ish. However, as always, your writing is moving and a pleasure to read. 'The End' is never the end! In my mind, Nick begged for forgivness, Greg gave in, and they lived happily ever after. *nods* Awesome work! ^_^ |
| Sillie 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abuseI'm glad the sentences inspired you, but bwa! You broke them up! *sniffles* ;_; Make it better, pwease? *puppy dog eyes* ;P |