I like all the scenes, because, well, I think it shows how old Sesshoumaru really is, although maybe that's just me. . . .

Thank you for writing such a cute, sad story.

My god, that was beautiful. Thanks for writing it, I enjoyed reading it.

Gasp. Incredible!

Strange...

-JW`chan

Wow. That blew me.

An interesting oneshot that you have written. I enjoyed it, but I didn't enjoy what had happened in it. Does that make any sense? One of the problems with being immortal is the inability to adapt as quickly as those who aren't immortal. You have done an excellent job of showing this with Sesshoumaru. He doesn't seem to know how to adapt to the changing times, especially Rin's death.
I got completely lost during the scene with Inuyasha except for the point that all things with humanities taint in them will die.

But all in all, an enjoyable piece.

Caitriona

that made me cry. it hurt to see these characters i've grown to love so much--just suffer. especially sess, who doesn't know how to cope with anything. really, a great story :)

I saw this was nominated for an IY Fanguild award and I had to come read it. I'm glad I did. It's wonderful, just like everything else you write, Liz. You did an excellent job, even though you made me cry--again! Take care, Wendy

There should be a drama for this...

I hope that this quote will be sufficient enough for how I feel.
"Sometimes silence says more than words."
*eyes glitter, favorites*

What an interesting pairing! Very enjoyable in a sad sort of way. :)

Namaste - A7

Wow! So beautifully done and written, I love it. This short fic had a poetic feel to it which made it more captivating to read. And also, this is the first story I've read with the pairing Sesshomaru/Souten, and now I'm starting to love that pairing, heh heh! ^_^

Good work! ^_^