 monipotter 2009-10-30 . chapter 18 great story! but id like to see more romance between eragon and marie |
 Reveur de l'amour 2009-10-29 . chapter 28WOW! I have just had the greatest reading experience in my entire life. In the span of two days I have read both of these lovely stories. And I regret not being able to read these earlier because you might not be able to read my review now. What happened? I am now reading this story on 10/30/09 and it says that you haven't updated it since 5/30/07!! PLEASE don't drop the story for I am looking forwars to the coming chapters with great anticipation.
Please update soon and if you plan on dropping the story please notify me and your other readers :) |
 Helen 2009-10-10 . chapter 28 this is so awesome
will you please continue? |
 armegddon 2009-05-14 . chapter 28hello i really like this story and was wondering if you are update it anytime soon i dont now if you are busy with school or something but when you get the chance please update it. |
 Zoe Montez 2009-03-17 . chapter 27your sequel to 'Marie's Dragon' is excellent. Well done!
I love how you've added much depth to the characters and how you've even added in humour. Would love to see more chapters however your profile stated it's on hiatus :/
that's a real shame...however if you do pursue your career as a writer I feel you should at least let us know what your writers name would be so we could read more of your fabulous stories. It would also be interesting to read your own original stories rather than those based on another authors work.
Zoe x |
 armegddon 2009-03-12 . chapter 9hello and good afternoon i really like your story and wish that you would continue it.It seems ashamed that it stops when it is so good.I would also like soom opinions on soom of my ideas for my first fanfic, PLEASE! help. |
 Devon-Cullen 2009-01-19 . chapter 28ug! i hate trianna! she is the worst! |
 flame 2008-12-21 . chapter 28 i absolutly LOVE Marie's dragon! u haven't updated in over a year! why not! you need to finish the story! please update! |
 TJay-Dragg Shiny-Latios Fluke 2008-10-25 . chapter 28i get why that chapter was needed.
and also why the next one is needed too!
Please? |
 vampires-are-forever 2008-10-08 . chapter 28i love it! please update! |
 Emrys Nerlun 2008-10-04 . chapter 28Oh My Goodness!
I love this story!
You have to write more chapters, please? |
 SingingInTheRain1989 2008-09-27 . chapter 28Hey i know it's been a year since you last updated but i would really hope that you continue the story! I'm really into it so please don't quit! I loved your version of Eragon and the way Marie and Eragon have a rocky relationship. It makes it all that more believable and Saphira and Oropher are so cute together! |
 darkravenkb226 2008-09-18 . chapter 28love the story, you ever going to finish it? |
 waterbendforlife 2008-08-19 . chapter 28Wow I've spent the last two days reading your stories and wow. Why couldn't you have written Eragon? Your writing actually brought me out of my writing slump so thanks and keep me posted on the story please
one of your big fans Waterbenderforlife |
 Val of Crimsonblade 2008-07-16 . chapter 28i really love this story youve made. I find it refreshing from a lot of storys i find that move to fast or to slow. Youve kept it at a perfect pace. but on ethin gyou need is to update! i really would love to see an update and a bit more oromis.:) |