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| exocontinual protocols 2006-09-05 ch 1,  | abuseVery good, and very sweet :) I liked...all of it ;) I liked her thoughts as she went through the school, then her realizing that she didn't want to be normal, and then the conversation with Kit. I liked the part about them holding hands, but as old freinds, because even lovers need to be each other's best freinds, too, or the relationship can't work out, plus it was like they were going back to there roots sort-of, or almost like this matter was so big that it was a freind that they needed, kind-of...I don't really know how to say what I'm trying to say but I like that part! I like all of it :) Very good! |
| TeenTypist 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abuseWow! This was really great. I can see her thinking she wants to be normal, and then realizing that that's not it all. Very well done. There's more to say and I cna't remember what it was. |
| Crazy Authoresses CAT and A... 2005-10-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. Kit swearing was just so adorable! -sigh- Great writing, IC-ness, and a very interesting plot. Loved it! |
| PinkPantherLady 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abuseOnly one review?!? You have only one? Well not anymore. I think this was a great little one-shot. Although I'm more inclined to read more sappy romance fics, I rather like this one because it can be taken both as romantic and as platonic. Very sweet, and I think this should actually be addressed in the series. It would be interesting to see how Diane Duane handles this issue. |
| seabiscuit0810 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's really sweet. I like it, and it's a good subject for a one-shot. |