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Gomorrha
2006-07-15 . chapter 3
Oh please, continue the story! I wanna know what Filch is doing to Draco now. You describe feelings and thoughts very well. I love your stories!
Alicia
2006-02-26 . chapter 3
T_T Poor Draco! And Blaise! And... well... geez there's a lot of angst here O_o
^_^ But oh-so-good angst. The kind that builds plots and characters. So please write more!
Kali09
2005-10-22 . chapter 3
Great story. I love it. I like how you made Draco go to Myrtle, Blaise/Draco, and Draco finally admitting at the bed. Can't wait for more. Plaese update.
Missy Star
2005-10-02 . chapter 1
Simple:
neie
2005-09-21 . chapter 3
Ack. I have a problem with love affairs with OCs. Great job with creating Draco's feeling, though; it's well portrayed. I hope HPDM gets it going pretty soon :)
sinsoftheflesh98
2005-09-20 . chapter 3
Hot Damn! I like this story whole bunches! I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see what happens with the whole Pierce thing and if anything happens with Blaise. And, of course, I can't wait for the H/D relationship to start! Post soon!
miss brownie
2005-09-20 . chapter 3
such a lovely story! i really like it! i hope you update soon!
CoPpErFyRmAgE
2005-09-20 . chapter 3
yay! another chappy! i love this story!
~Mel
XO'MagickMoon'OX
2005-09-19 . chapter 3
Aww! Poor Draco!! #^_^# ... well, now that he's over his denial, he and Harry can hook up... wait, that still leaves ... Pierce ... damn ... something's going to happen at Hogesmeade, I can tell ... hehe ... aw, but just the way you describe everything .. oogh, you have such a powerful style, and I love it!! O, and that mouse that Draco saved, bettcha it was Pierce's messenger mouse thingy, right?? Yup, I'm right ... I think. That had to be it ... aw, poor Draco! Anyway, awesome chapter ... UPDATE ASAP!
meg
2005-09-05 . chapter 2
YAY! I love Harry/Draco fanfics! Can't wait to see what you come up with! Maby Draco will kidnapp Harry, or Harry and Pierce get in a fight and Harry runs to Draco, I just can't wait!
Harmonic Friction
2005-09-04 . chapter 2
I love it. Ha ha, and I was like 'Oh, no Mrs. Norris!' when the mouse first pranced in. lol. Poor Draco. Eh. I know the feeling, I suppose. And I detect hints of you in a certain charie, too. Really great. Aw, H/R is so cute.
Harmonic Friction
2005-09-04 . chapter 1
Hey! LOVE the story so far. Harry in a little thong- to me there is nothing more frightening, but as we know, for Draco, well...

GREAT start, and I cannot wait to read more.
beaglegurl618
2005-09-04 . chapter 2
great so far... still waitin
XO'MagickMoon'OX
2005-09-04 . chapter 2
Aww Harry and Pierce are so cute together! I love your OC, by the way. Blue hair? O_o ... hehe, I like it. So ... wait ... Hermione and Ron are MARRIED? Is that even possible when you're sixteen and in school? Anyway, I assume this fic will end up HarryxDraco ... and I have a sneaking suspicion that things are not going to go as planned at Hogsmeade. Am I right?? And then the HarryxDraco-ness will ensue!! Heheehehe, wonderful story! Can't wait for the NEXT UPDATE! We!
XO'MagickMoon'OX
2005-09-04 . chapter 1
Wonderful story! I love Draco's little internal struggle ... amazing! "Or maybe you're actually gay ..." Yes, Draco, I'm sorry to tell you, but dreaming about other guys in both your sleeping and waking hours might imply that you are gay. Now, get over it and go make-out with Harry!! -points at Harry- ...

Harry: "Huh? Who? Me?"
Me: "Yes you." -pushes Harry and Draco into a nearby closet- "Now don't come out until you've both learned to cope with the fact that you want each other." -evil laugh-

Yae for slash! Hehe, anyway, great fic ... very nice style, very fluent and easy to read, with very few mistakes ... ^_^ Love it!
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