Dude that last sentence was completly unexpected I mean rlly he's gonna go around collecting green eyes now lol but rlly its good to shock people cuz then it hard to figure out how the story actually ends me personally thought he was gonna kill himself not some inoccent old lady good story tho good story

holy crap the end was amazing I was like wtf great work

so beautiful, it made me cry at the end! i really like your storys, and guess what, MY BIRTHDAY IS MARCH 15TH TOO!

That was cute expect for the last line. Good job.

love da story but da end is weird

OMG sasuke are you going to kill that old lady? I was crying at Sakura dying and how much Sasuke missed her but with whole old lady thing...that was freaky?

IT STARTED TO MAKE ME CRY until the end thats when i got over it and laughed at the thought of him taking her eyes out

*shudders* WTF?

un very intereting storie sweet but uh well if im right sasuke ment to take the beautiful eyes out of sakura. if thats true then well it was a litle disterbing to read that but in honest truth that is a little disgusting to read about and wel i think your getting the picture of watim geting at and all

The plot was nice and I was suprised that Sakura would die, I expected a sappy ending but this was nice too. The ending was a little violent though, when he finally goes insane.

another-dreamer282

that...um...thats almost two years since you made this story...i was actually hoping that what you said in the ending was only a figure of speech...but i guess i was wrong...but that's okay...i dont mind sick endings...people who lose the love of their life can sometimes go crazy...its just that its kind of sad that after all that happy fluffy stuff with sakura, he would end up all warped and cookoo...oh, well...well, i like the story...and i definitely like how you ended it...no matter HOW creepy it is

WOWW! NO OFFENCE BUT... IS HE, LIKE, GONNA KILL HER? XD LOL J/K BUT IF HE WAS... PLEASE EMAIL ME OK?

wait.. i dont understand..."taking her eyes out"...? could you please explain that to me?

ja ne

AngeLic Eyes X22

nice story, bit ooc but meh, umm...quite disturbing at the end

Aw, It made me cry! But the last part was a little disturbing...-_-