too cute! too funny!

o-m-g... i;m crying, literally. This story is so sad... well this chapter is, I like the happy ending better. Great job on a wondeerful story!

AW, how sad but the same time, how romantic.

You know, the first chapter was gold. It just all clicked so well. And Harry's character was so intriguing; he was such a charming little brat. The interactions were nice. Especially the intro, no seriously, you did it really well. It was a great hook, not to mention the summary was catching. Especially loved the part with Snape using Harry to rip on James.

And then it all went to hell when he and Severus kissed. The same day he's realizing he's gay, and the next he's following the other around. With each chapter he progresses more and more into a whiny girl. Much like Shuichi from Gravitation, ugh.

The awful nickname of Sev and the overused 'did I just think that!?' make their ugly appearance.

And then suddenly Remus and Sirius are gay, and won't stop kissing each other. All their quips reek. And there are never any other Gryffindors in the common room. Same for Slytherin.

Severus is incredibly cold-hearted, which is fine. But Harry is just such a pushover that it kills the mood. He just lets them all walk over him. It's aggravating because I was under the impression that he was a tough boy, smart and devious. I feel like I was cheated out of such a promising character. It's just irritating.

And then of course he decides to kiss Severus in public, yes, behind some bleachers is still public. It was just so predictable that someone would catch them, which gives way to add some flat drama. Really, this little plot device is so overused it's dead. So dead, I resolutely believe nothing good can ever come out of it again.

Then he totally PMSs, and now he's crying in front of others, and...no. Just no.

This was a total bait and switch. F*cking--this has me rambling. What a waste of time.

That was so increadible sad T.T I loved it by far one of the best fics I've read in a very long time ahh this ending is so much better I'm gonna cry again. T.T

I think that this ending is way better thatn the other one. It made me cry. If a story can make me cry, then it has to be really good. I don't usually cry at all...** Work!


~CIL

Totally wonderful angst. My god i was tearing my hair out wanting to stab Dumbledor... and not enough people knew just how wrong they were, it was a very subtle gut wrenching sorrow that you have created... Poor Harry, screw dying with a smile on his face, the only freak'n way he could be with his beloved was to kill him self?! Yeah, great job Dumbles, that is definitely getting away from the pain, does he not realize that while Severus and Harry are near each other they can still FIX things? After that little memory boost i bet Harry would have run down those stairs only to tackle Sev and never let him go! it was a wonderful tale to read even though i am ** as hell and antsy instead of calm like i was hoping a nice snarry fic would do... i am impressed, this is going into my angst vault

I like this ending the best too. not happy, but perfect none the less.

you are an amazing writer. the complexity of the story the drama kept me guessing and wondering what would happen next. even when the story ended i was still a little confused!! i wish i had your talent for writing usaully with a story this long the author loses my intress about half way threw but this story was amazing i felt like i was reading a story from a bestselling author!please keep writing more awsome stories

Honey I love this story!

If you can believe it I stayed up untill 4 O'clock this morning reading this marvalose peice of liturature.

I was crying for over half of this fic.

How could you do that to the boys.

I love you babe, but I am about ready to kill you for 1)Killing of the boys, 2)keeping the boys apart, and 3)leaving so many people with a broken heart, although it does explain why Severous hates Harry, He reminds him of the Harry of the past.

This story is Wonderful, Magical, and just plain awsome.

keep up the good work babe.

Your faithful reader,
wolfchildscub

great story

*cries* Its one of the best fanfictions of Harry/Severus I've ever read... Ofcourse, it still left me crying like a little girl, but I understand Harry... not wanting to live without his love. I guessed he would take suicide, and I think you've written it very well, to be honest.

Awesome story! Shame on you for making me cry though... Anyhoo, Thank you very much for sharing your hard work with us all.

=^..^=

OMG!!
I can be SO stupid sometimes!
i was just curious and took a look at the 'not so happy ending'-chapter... T_T
I shouldn't have done it...
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nevertheless... really good story!! ;o)