 Queen B of Randomness 2007-01-11 . chapter 4hehe, still loving all teh randomness! kiby is awesome and pink (even tho kirio is red, and a purple kirby would be AWESOME, if its not flurrie...) YAYNESS! update soon! |
 C. Miasma 2007-01-09 . chapter 4 Skwee! You finally updated! Good for you! This makes me feel all warm and fuzzy in side! Oh, and great chappie, too. ^^ |
 Queen B of Randomness 2007-01-09 . chapter 1wow, this is a funny fic! although, i havnt played many kirby games so i dont know many of the characters and what they look like...but that doesnt stop me from liking it! XD oh, and chapter 1 is called 'castle and dragon' fyi, and update soon! |
 Raykura-Kura 2007-01-09 . chapter 4Right... VERY random. Also, while I do like the Kirby games, I'm not that big of a fan of the re-casting into Kirby characters.
Oh well, to each their own, good chapters, & if only I could figure out how to submit my own chapters to |
 Yoshizilla-Rhedosaurus 2006-01-14 . chapter 3Peppy: Add Homer Simpson
Yoshi: And May from Pokemon
Peppy: Add Homer Simpson
Yoshi: And Misty from Pokemon
Peppy: Add Homer Simpson
Yoshi: And Ash + Pikachu from Pokemon
Peppy: Add Homer Simpson
Yoshi: And Brock from Pokemon
Peppy: Add Homer Simpson
Yoshi: And Max from Pokemon
Peppy: Add Ho-
Dr. Hoshi: ALL RIGHT, ALL READY!! JUST END THIS RETARDED (CENSORED!) REVIEW!!
Peppy/Yoshi: Sorry. Please continue.
Peppy: P.S.: Add Homer Simpson. |
 Flameboo 2005-11-09 . chapter 3Sorry for my absenceness of ness...ness...! Ah well, I've started working on just normal fiction. Yoink! Very funny chapter. Can't wait to see Halloween Chapter! Better make it scary!
P.S- Look! A mad smiley! >:-o |
 LordLuffy07 of the Merry Go 2005-11-04 . chapter 3Dammit, I'M in gray!
GREEN CLOTHES!! SOMEONE GET ME GREEN CLOTHES!
Awesome chapter, buddy!! |
 The Great Chicken Miasma 2005-10-31 . chapter 3^_^ Awesome to the max. It was just as crazy as I intended CRP to be. You did a great job of pulling it off! I don't think you ever said who the Shadow Sirens were (and if you did, ignore this), but I think they should be ELEMENTAL BROOM HATTERS! Beldam can freeze things with her broom, Vivian can burn things with hers, and Marilyn can set things on fire with hers! ^_^ Just a random thought there. |
 Flameboo 2005-09-25 . chapter 2BLAH! IT IS BLAH! Now...after i've had my 545796 coffees, i'm back to normal. This was a greaat chapter. Dude, I'm really hyper right now and I typeing this really long review and i'm gonna say this was really funny, especially the battle scenes and stuff and I'm saying this in one sentence isn't that interesting?
P.S- I thought TEC was quite funny.
P.S.S- I LIKE PIE! |
 Chicken Miasma 2005-09-25 . chapter 2 Really awesome! This is such an honor to have my idea redone like this. Koops is a Waddle Dee! Cute beyond cute! ^^
(P.S.: I think Bowser should be King Dedede, since they're both kings and all, but that's just me) |
 LordLuffy07 of the Merry Go 2005-09-24 . chapter 2The B Worm.
bee Worm?
The L letrtic slide.
electric slide
The A Cha.
cha cha
The H hop.
the hip hop |
 LordLuffy07 of the Merry Go 2005-09-14 . chapter 1Not as good as CRp, but pretty good, pretty good indeed. |
 Mario the Great Wobbuffet 2005-09-11 . chapter 1YAH! KIRBY PARODY ROX! |
 Ken Xiraka 2005-09-10 . chapter 1not as good as the real thing, cuz you dont have Cort-- Chichlet--Chicken- i just went through this on Super Pikario RPG... Anyway, youree version is kinda good. Looking forward to the rest. |
 The Great Chicken Miasma 2005-09-03 . chapter 1Really great story! It's almost like CRP ^_^ Try adding more your original ideas so people won't be stupid and say you copied this (Like maybe calling Petalburg Greens Greens, just a thought =P) And the first Chapter is called "Castle and Dragon" |