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Reviews for: Wide Rule Kirio: The Really Young But Old Door!
Queen B of Randomness
2007-01-11 . chapter 4
hehe, still loving all teh randomness! kiby is awesome and pink (even tho kirio is red, and a purple kirby would be AWESOME, if its not flurrie...) YAYNESS! update soon!
C. Miasma
2007-01-09 . chapter 4
Skwee! You finally updated! Good for you! This makes me feel all warm and fuzzy in side! Oh, and great chappie, too. ^^
Queen B of Randomness
2007-01-09 . chapter 1
wow, this is a funny fic! although, i havnt played many kirby games so i dont know many of the characters and what they look like...but that doesnt stop me from liking it! XD oh, and chapter 1 is called 'castle and dragon' fyi, and update soon!
Raykura-Kura
2007-01-09 . chapter 4
Right... VERY random. Also, while I do like the Kirby games, I'm not that big of a fan of the re-casting into Kirby characters.

Oh well, to each their own, good chapters, & if only I could figure out how to submit my own chapters to
Yoshizilla-Rhedosaurus
2006-01-14 . chapter 3
Peppy: Add Homer Simpson
Yoshi: And May from Pokemon
Peppy: Add Homer Simpson
Yoshi: And Misty from Pokemon
Peppy: Add Homer Simpson
Yoshi: And Ash + Pikachu from Pokemon
Peppy: Add Homer Simpson
Yoshi: And Brock from Pokemon
Peppy: Add Homer Simpson
Yoshi: And Max from Pokemon
Peppy: Add Ho-
Dr. Hoshi: ALL RIGHT, ALL READY!! JUST END THIS RETARDED (CENSORED!) REVIEW!!
Peppy/Yoshi: Sorry. Please continue.
Peppy: P.S.: Add Homer Simpson.
Flameboo
2005-11-09 . chapter 3
Sorry for my absenceness of ness...ness...! Ah well, I've started working on just normal fiction. Yoink! Very funny chapter. Can't wait to see Halloween Chapter! Better make it scary!

P.S- Look! A mad smiley! >:-o
LordLuffy07 of the Merry Go
2005-11-04 . chapter 3
Dammit, I'M in gray!
GREEN CLOTHES!! SOMEONE GET ME GREEN CLOTHES!

Awesome chapter, buddy!!
The Great Chicken Miasma
2005-10-31 . chapter 3
^_^ Awesome to the max. It was just as crazy as I intended CRP to be. You did a great job of pulling it off! I don't think you ever said who the Shadow Sirens were (and if you did, ignore this), but I think they should be ELEMENTAL BROOM HATTERS! Beldam can freeze things with her broom, Vivian can burn things with hers, and Marilyn can set things on fire with hers! ^_^ Just a random thought there.
Flameboo
2005-09-25 . chapter 2
BLAH! IT IS BLAH! Now...after i've had my 545796 coffees, i'm back to normal. This was a greaat chapter. Dude, I'm really hyper right now and I typeing this really long review and i'm gonna say this was really funny, especially the battle scenes and stuff and I'm saying this in one sentence isn't that interesting?

P.S- I thought TEC was quite funny.

P.S.S- I LIKE PIE!
Chicken Miasma
2005-09-25 . chapter 2
Really awesome! This is such an honor to have my idea redone like this. Koops is a Waddle Dee! Cute beyond cute! ^^

(P.S.: I think Bowser should be King Dedede, since they're both kings and all, but that's just me)
LordLuffy07 of the Merry Go
2005-09-24 . chapter 2
The B Worm.
bee Worm?

The L letrtic slide.
electric slide

The A Cha.
cha cha

The H hop.
the hip hop
LordLuffy07 of the Merry Go
2005-09-14 . chapter 1
Not as good as CRp, but pretty good, pretty good indeed.
Mario the Great Wobbuffet
2005-09-11 . chapter 1
YAH! KIRBY PARODY ROX!
Ken Xiraka
2005-09-10 . chapter 1
not as good as the real thing, cuz you dont have Cort-- Chichlet--Chicken- i just went through this on Super Pikario RPG... Anyway, youree version is kinda good. Looking forward to the rest.
The Great Chicken Miasma
2005-09-03 . chapter 1
Really great story! It's almost like CRP ^_^ Try adding more your original ideas so people won't be stupid and say you copied this (Like maybe calling Petalburg Greens Greens, just a thought =P) And the first Chapter is called "Castle and Dragon"
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