 2007-03-12 . chapter 1 wow this story is awesome! but still some parts are sad. kirby: feh (throws cellphone at author) |
 Jessi the Fangirl 2007-02-28 . chapter 4-hides- I'ma reviewin'! Please don't throw a phone at me!
Heheh...sorry...where have you been the last...what, year-and-a-half? And here I was, thinking you died or something! Ha, I guess I'm wrong. Good thing, too...being dead is bad for then fans.
YAY I HAVE A SWORD AND SWORDS ARE COOL
...I think that's all I had to say. -bangs head on table-
Good job anyways! :D |
 Grievous daydreamer 2005-12-17 . chapter 3Aww! Two of them gone? No! My fave other Kirby from the game is the red one! |
 Jessi the Fangirl 2005-10-30 . chapter 3NU SECOND DEATH
and its only been 3 chapters
oh purple kirby @_@
I like blue best, but purple is nice too @_@ ^^ |
 Jessi the Fangirl 2005-09-30 . chapter 2if I'm right:
Taelia:green
Ryan:red
Kadi:yellow
You killed off a character...and its only the second chapter!
Cool. ^^ |
 Jessi the Fangirl 2005-09-24 . chapter 1Cool fanfic
I like it when Kirby says: "Feh!" |
 Mr. Monopoly 2005-09-08 . chapter 1I think this story is a good work the author did a nice job. I Like how he used the T.V. very nice job |
 Lady HexaKnight 2005-09-08 . chapter 1Not Bad... Keep it up! |